I love this,please update soon I cant get enought of this story and your other truly have a talent.

More chapters please but if this is the end of the story I thank you for letting me read it

God I love this story plz make more

Please update

Hi

Nice update. Like the pervious chapters, much of the quality is good, but there are spelling errors and you need to work on making space between your paragraphs.

The various cultural references are good. The original characters are good. Also, the tournament jockey is amusing.

The characterization, interactions and dialog were great too.

The battle scenes are very good, namely how Ira is a powerhouse but meets his match at least twice in the rounds.

Another nice cliffhanger. I wonder what will happen.

The wholesome standards are high, except for a few uncalled swear words.

I hope this review brightens your day. God bless

Data Seeker

Hi

This is nice update. There are some spelling errors; also you need to work on the paragraphs, namely space.

The first half with Ira and the Mane six was pretty good. I like the characterization, interaction, dialog and such.

Your original casts of characters are pretty good too; Ariel intrigues me the most.

The second half with the Tournament was pretty good. I like the basic story structure and the characterization.

Nice cliffhanger at the end.

The wholesome standards are high except for some uncalled swear word.

I hope this review brightens your day. God bless

Data Seeker

Hi

This is a nice continuation. Like the first chapter, there are typos and you need to work on space between the paragraphs.

The beginning with the aftermath was great.

The following with Ira awaking, the tension between him and the ponies due to being strangers, and learning about his past and finally welcoming him as a friend were well written and flowed well.

You did great describing their characters, interactions and dialog. It seems Ira has found a peace he has long been denied. I wonder how the scared being will do.

This is what I think of the wholesome standards.

The language is clean except for an uncalled swear word. Nothing else is offensive. Certain references are good too.

I hope you like this review. God bless

Data Seeker

Hi

I decided to read your story. The quality is good in many areas, good narration, interaction, dialog, suspense, drama and emotion.

There are a few spelling errors and the paragraphs need work.

The character Estevan aka Ira Diablo is interesting. He is a man full of hate, yet isn't heartless, namely by helping those in trouble.

The beginning of the story that introduces Estevan aka Ira Diablo was good. Then through some fluke, he is pulled into Equestria.

The middlde part that turns to Equestria is great. The Mane Six decided to have a party and invite their family and friends was good.

Then two foes, Sambra and Queen of the Changelings was great. But first I felt they were too powerful, but when they monolog the origin of their new power, it felt well written.

Then some new dark pony shows up, and looks very angry. Ira's new form (a dragon/pony Hybrid) is pretty good. And his powers are interesting too.

The battle is very dynamic, its not the typical good vs. evil, its evil vs. hate combined with compassion.

So Sambra is dead, the Queen is injured and escapes, and Ira collapses from pain and exhaustion, leaving the ponies perplexed by this very dark, scary, but seemingly well meaning monster.

This is what I think of the wholesome standards.

The language is mostly clean, though I am dubious about one word.
Nothing is suggestively offensive.
The violence is...passable. Not too gruesome for my taste.

I hope this review brightens your day. God bless

Data Seeker

This was awesome. Can't wait to see more.

please update

Please add more chapters.

I see there were a whole lot of mistakes seriously did you keep your eyes on your fingers? hmm so in this story celestia and luna's parents are still around as well as cadance's parents though I don't like luna and celestia's father's attitude towards ira nor tj's well maybe they'll warm up to them looks like to me tj's gonna hook up with rarity and who is that mysterious pony that showed up at the end? some new villain? well write again soon.

You got the King Sombra death part from Godzilla didn't you?

Good job, Bro! This chapter kicks a**! Just like this story does! And just like you do!

Nice job. I love it and my oc character.