I'd like to point out that this entire thing happened because Mira is always bullying Natsu, yeah what he did was wrong but nobody seems to point out that Mira's behavior was the lynch pin for this whole thing and that how she treats Natsu is toxic and wrong.

It's one thing to read a story that very well captures both the feel of the "pre-canon" guild members that both handles one of the more interesting Natsu ships and plays off of the anime. What really impresses me regarding this story is that it was adopted from another writer. I can't imagine how much work could have gone into continuing the story from the point it initially stopped. Keep up the good work and I hope the sequel is just as good, if not better.

I hope you don't have that drama of denying that you like him because of Lisana even with him not liking Lisana

And me here hoping something will happen to him, honestly I think it would be nice for him to let it go, since she's making this whole storm in a glass of water because of him reading the diary.
I don't think it's only fair that asshole suffers.

I love this story, but this Natsu gives a rage to his stupidity (especially to me I can't stand dumb characters), another thing I found strange is that you made it look like Cana is 2 years older than him when she should be the same age (since Natsu's official age is unknown).

Omg lemme just say im sooo happy i decided to read this through. It was such a magnificent journey and it was all worth it in the end. Keep up the great work :')

i feel bad for natsu. now he is dense as that guy on infinate stratos

oh there all dead

good story I love, I'll read the continuation, I hope this is as good as this, a greeting, bye!

Any good romance story should have a wise and kind long-bearded old man advices like that one.

I loved this story so much i had read it all in one night, thank you for an amazing story.
I'm looking forward to reading the sequel.

I love this fic omg I don't even ship mira and natsu but this fic is so well written!
Also how big is Natsu exactly? The way you describe it in the fic makes me think he is Laxus sized in the anime (from Fairy Tail 2014 where everyone is more muscular than the previous fairy tail seasons) Could you give a comparison or something

I enjoyed this and it was very well written but I think more could have been made of Laxus having a thing for Mira after Natsu returned. It could have caused more conflict between Mira and Natsu and put more road blocks in the way of them getting together.

Probs the #1 NaMi fic of all time. The only flaw is that people didn't bother to raise the favs and follows to 1K. Dafuq

So far so good, I just Wonder why is this M rated