| Reviews for Shared Strength |
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   XXAlter chapter 12 . 6/6 This chapter really made me pointing out the weird points in this story. Don't get me wrong, this is a great story but it just really bugs me with some points. First of all, you don't feel much pain in SAO. It's because pain absorber is set to the highest setting in SAO, since you didn't mention anything about Kayaba turning it off, it really made the story confusing for people. Second of all, there should be no such things as broken ribs in here. Why? It'd take too much resources to recreate such details, only Underworld with the supercomputer in Ocean Turtle is capable of that. SAO would simply freeze if it's made to recreate such things. Anyway, that's all I got to say. I hope you'd do a revision on this, this is such a great story, I just hope you'd give the details more attention. Thank you |
| madtad1 chapter 38 . 5/28 Loved your writing! |
| AcidESP chapter 38 . 5/27 It is a very good story, although I am missing the blessed lemon, the truth is very good, without a doubt it goes to my top-fic, personally I like the Kazuto (Kirito) x Shino (Sinon) more [I'm not very classic canonical] it is very good a small harem, a greeting see you, bye! |
| Midnight chapter 10 . 5/21 This is really well written! I’m writing an original story and your writing style is helping me find my own style. Keep writing, ok? |
| Kirinon Fan 101 chapter 15 . 3/20 What was Sinon reading? Hm? Icha Icha Paradise?! |
| Rebel writer scum chapter 38 . 2/7 Absolutely a joy from beginning to end. Absolutely brilliant story, I loved it so much! |
| Kat chapter 1 . 11/19/2019 can U make a (sao) lemon with kazuto ether being with asuna or shino! I WOULD LIKE TO SEE HOW IT WOULD GO ! PLEASE AND THANK YOU! |
| Kairan1979 chapter 38 . 10/30/2019 Nice Epilogue of the story. Though I wish you wrote about their adventures in ALO. |
| Kairan1979 chapter 35 . 10/29/2019 Kirito is a noble idiot, as always. But that's why we like him. |
| Kairan1979 chapter 34 . 10/29/2019 To be fair, I preferred the canon reveal. |
| Kairan1979 chapter 33 . 10/28/2019 I wish I had a friend like Klein. ))) P.S. Sleeping Unique Skill? Reminds me of Snorlax. |
| Kairan1979 chapter 32 . 10/28/2019 One moment of overconfidence is all what it takes. |
| Kairan1979 chapter 31 . 10/28/2019 Your version of defeating the monster is better than Yui with a giant sword. |
| Kairan1979 chapter 30 . 10/28/2019 Both Yui and Alice? I feel sorry for Kirito and the girls. |
| Kairan1979 chapter 29 . 10/28/2019 Good chapter. Looking forward to see how you are going to deal with the last arc of SAO. |
