Oooo. This is spicy. I dig it. Hope to see more!

so fleur is a templar... interesting

Good start!
*Looks at the bottom of the page and doesn't see another chapter*
DAMNIT

huh.

Interesting start. I look forward to the next update.

Is Harry really dead on this story? Can you keep fleur single no relationships or one night stands with anyone?

I love the tease at the ending! I totally did not see that coming.

Its a great beginning,
And considering its not u first story I read ... I can't w8 for u mice to be back for these story

I'm not sure where this is headed but you've caught my interest-I can't wait to read more!

The story is starting great. But why did you abandon it?

This looks good, but I don't get it. Was Harry an Assassin or a Templar? Anyway, keep up the good work!

...What is going on? Nevermind, we'll need the next chapter to find that out. It's good that you made us want to know.

Harry's dead what the Frak!please continue and Harry come back and go Harry/Fleur pairing

please upppdate i love it i love it I LOVE IT

Very good, I really like it. I'm looking forward to see how you reintroduce Harry to the story (if you do so, which I guess you will seeing seeig he is in the character listed).
By the way I suposse the different types of letter are to let us know that the Delacousr are speaking french if in the future you wish to put some of it in frenc I offer to help. although most authors I read simply change the letter or use google translator.
Anyway good story
Keep writing