| Reviews for My Twist on the Orion and Artemis Myth |
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  Guest chapter 12 . 7/22 Who to pair Percy with? How about anyone that's not called Artemis. |
 toile grant chapter 25 . 7/16 good |
| Callum Runchman chapter 25 . 7/12 Come on, please just update this and finish the story. It started off with a potential Pertemis arc but now seems like there's no possibility of that or any relationship. The 2nd titan war arc is just the same as before and not really interesting if I'm honest |
| Markus-Antonius chapter 25 . 7/11 What does Percy get out of all of this though? I can’t imagine he doesn’t have an angle beyond running a camp right? I feel like he is or should be plotting something else behind the scenes. |
| Markus-Antonius chapter 6 . 7/11 Why wouldn’t they tell the other Olympians? It’s not like there is any need for secrecy? |
| Checkingdude chapter 24 . 7/10 Her arm? Really? Instead of a really hard to hit area, it’s literally right out in the open. As long as her shield is over it, fine. But a simple shove and “whoops, I accidentally scratched my mortal point, now I die...blah.” I’m just saying...really!? Her arm? Okay, that’s out of my system. So obviously I’m displeased with the location of Thalia’s mortal point, but your story has been good so far. Keep it up...but if you wanna change that little detail, literally nobody stopping you... |
| AxeTheGreat chapter 25 . 7/4 Nice |
| PotterheadParzival chapter 24 . 5/10 Hey is this fic abandoned? I think that you should pair percy with artemis only. After he forgives her somehow. |
| Nahom chapter 1 . 4/21 It is really good |
| TheDesertFox12 chapter 24 . 3/27 good stuff pls update |
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/16 we want more right now please |
| Uzumaki D. Dragon chapter 24 . 8/1/2019 I have no idea what are you trying to make here. Like every fic in which percy is betrayed in the begining he is like, I 'll dethrone Zeus and I hate olympians. and like every fic he became zeus bitch, kneeling before him and helping them againest the titnes So Its like there is no point to this story whatsoever. |
| blackcharizard762 chapter 14 . 6/29/2019 How would Percy know what a biker is they didn't exist when he was 9 |
| aSinglePancake chapter 24 . 6/26/2019 I love the growth I've seen in your writing! It's wonderful to see where you started and how you've grown into your own style! Absolutely wonderful |
| aSinglePancake chapter 16 . 6/26/2019 I realize why the characters weren't reaching out to me, they don't seem to have any individuality in the text. Each person seems to speak, react and think the same way. I'd love to see some more individuality slipped into the characters, a good way I remember to do exactly that is to remember that people and characters are the sums of their experiences. Barring that, the actual plot is intriguing. I'm curious as to how it all goes on |
