Reviews for The Promise of Amazing
348joey chapter 36 . 4/21/2019
There's no way Robin was about to maneuver or fight in a wedding dress.
Allstarall chapter 36 . 9/12/2018
I liked the Lucinas’ matching headpiece/bracelet thing mechanic. Future or present, it is still Luci.

I really really liked that ending. A humorous romantic.
Allstarall chapter 35 . 9/12/2018
I found it amusing that Chrom was panicked and how Fred didn’t vocally acknowledge* that. It was in character, but a rare side of them.
Allstarall chapter 32 . 9/12/2018
I liked that he mourned, and how he got over that stage.
Allstarall chapter 29 . 9/11/2018
Ow. The pain.
Allstarall chapter 9 . 9/11/2018
Chrom’s little jealousy problem was solved cutely.
Allstarall chapter 8 . 9/11/2018
Awwww. Chrom was jealous.
I liked how everyone liked Robin, especially the Khans. I also really loved how you made Chrom and Robin fast besties.
348joey chapter 29 . 5/23/2018
Frederick is channeling his inner Kellam.

Third breath/breathe error.
348joey chapter 12 . 5/23/2018
That's the second breath/breathe mix-up you've had.
348joey chapter 34 . 5/23/2018
New favorite part of this story:
"Now Lucina, when have I ever just told anyone anything? If there's one thing I pride myself on it's that I like to make things as difficult as possible for everyone involved…."
348joey chapter 35 . 5/22/2018
I see that Morgan was also tapping into his inner Kellam.

I'm certain that after all of this, Robin will say, "Nah. I don't wanna go home with you. Thanks for the offer, but I have literally anywhere else to go." Then Chrom will say, "Oh, okay. Cool, well, see ya around. I'm going to go home now. Bye."
The End

Best ending ever
348joey chapter 24 . 5/21/2018
If by "arrest them" you mean "KILL THEM ALL! But leave my daughter alive"…
348joey chapter 23 . 5/21/2018
A least he didn't "accidentally" walk in on her bathing.
348joey chapter 13 . 5/21/2018
Gaius certainly knew 𝘰𝘧 Emmeryn; she saved his life.

I'm surprised Robin didn't realize she was being surrounded. That's a rather large tactical error.

"for her sake as well as yours. Consider letting her know." (sic)
Et tu, Frederick?

Well, I'm certain that they'll find Robin in the near fut—
"Chapters: 36"
Oh, right… I mean, yeah, there's a lot more of the Bed Time Story left to tell, but still…
348joey chapter 21 . 5/21/2018
Shame on you, Robin! You're flirting with a married man!
…yeah he's married to 𝘺𝘰𝘶, but you don't know that yet!

"I thought you'd make a funny face if I scared you-and I was right!" sounds a lot like "I thought it would be funny, and it was!"
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