Reviews for Villain Protagonists |
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multyfangirl21 chapter 5 . 1/30/2017 They work out pretty good as best friends. |
multyfangirl21 chapter 4 . 1/30/2017 LOL , looks like Piccolo is cursed to be the trainer of half Saiyan children. |
multyfangirl21 chapter 3 . 1/30/2017 lol What's with the fish? |
fuzzy122672 chapter 3 . 9/18/2016 NOT TILL THE FISH JUMPS. Best line since ever. |
anlmoon chapter 5 . 2/7/2016 very good. i like it all the character interaction was good and it think picolo and vegeta could be friends |
feedthegrimmjows chapter 5 . 1/15/2016 This is amazing! I really loved what you did here and how you wrote Piccolo and Vegeta's interactions was so believable. Great work! |
EvaF chapter 5 . 4/16/2015 Oh my! Dear author you have no idea how I hard laughed and punched the table while reading these shorts (in a very positive way). I love every moment here. Their interactions are rare in the original story yet your portrait of them feels just right. And the trio (either Goku or Gohan) parts are so funny! Thanks for writing these stories. It is by far one of the best I've ever read in this fandom. |
cadmium yellow tuesday chapter 5 . 4/13/2015 Ha. This was pretty interesting. I like the way you write these two. It's a shame we don't get to see them interacting more. Overall,nice. Preeettty Nice. And I noticed how you titled each chapter after a TV Trope. Nice touch :D |
CJAAM chapter 5 . 4/8/2015 Please, please, please write more of this. I love it when big tough assholes get drunk and spill secrets, and you've just picked the biggest, toughest asshole to torture. |
Smithback chapter 5 . 4/1/2015 AJAJAJAJ ... AJAJJA ... AJAJAJ AWESOME, FANTASTIC AND GREAT BEYONG WORDS... "Getting thrown into mountains is a surprisingly great way to build character" SURE... BUT YEAH, VEGETA IS RIGHT... GOHAN... WEARING A CAPE... AND ALL OF THAT , IS SOMETHINK LIKE HAVEING DOBLE PERSONALITY... NOT SURE IF THE MOUNTAIN TRAINING IS A GOOD IDEA AFTER ALL... AN AWESOME STORY, THANKS A LOT |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2015 lol vegtea karot killed alot of pepole here is a list wiki/List_of_characters_killed_by_Goku#Pre-Dragon_Ball |
ladylace616 chapter 2 . 3/30/2015 This story is bad ass. |
Dreamwraith chapter 4 . 3/23/2015 So of all the "oldtimers" to have posted in my extended absence, I find this. :) I'm so happy! I think that so far you've only had a few OOC-ish moments, but given these two men in particular, I'm not surprised. I've found that when two people are comfortable around each other (which Piccolo and Vegeta are, here), they tend to open up more, and you see a side of them revealed that never sees the light anywhere else. So would it really make it OOC, or is it just familiarity? I like that you did make Piccolo "nicer". It's something that I don't think is touched upon much in fanfiction, or when it is, it's attributed to Gohan. Early on in Piccolo's life, yes, his behavioral changes are due to Gohan. Later, it's the fusion with Nail, and finally, it's his fusion with Kami that gives us the guy the kids all know and love. He's more mellow post-Kami, and I think you've caught that well. What did surprise me is something that you pointed out yourself here that I never noticed (mostly because I try to ignore the whole Buu Saga) - that nobody ever called Vegeta out on allowing himself to be possessed. I had never really thought about it before. Honestly, though, who *would* say something to him? Not Goku. Not any of the humans, except Bulma. Maybe Gohan, maybe Piccolo. And of all people, I would expect Piccolo to understand Vegeta's reasons for doing what he did. Piccolo and Vegeta certainly have a fun dynamic going on between the two of them, but I will admit that the part I enjoyed the most is Goku teleporting in and scaring the bejeesus out of Vegeta. :) And of course, the whole scene that followed was priceless! Welcome back from retirement! It's a good comeback, and I'm looking forward to reading more from you if that's what you choose to do. |
Shadow chapter 4 . 3/23/2015 I think this is a great story. It puts conversations I've always thought would happen in specific scenes that fit very well with the characters overall. Anyways on your note of being willing to do scenes if people requested them, I was wondering if you could come up with anything for the Battle of Gods movie at the end where we see Goku, Piccolo and Vegeta standing in front of a lake near Bulam's party. Piccolo could have a conversation about te fight and the future or something (perhaps regarding Piccolo's training of Trunks?) before Goku walks up. Just a though. Thanks for writing, -ShadowTheSuperMajin |
LeChick chapter 4 . 3/23/2015 This was cute! And "Vegeta's first reaction was to hit Piccolo for insinuating his child was anything less than perfect" is both the most adorable and most Vegeta line I have ever read. Also, damn you to hell for using TV tropes as titles. I looked up one and now it's almost 2am. |