Hello, I love the story from the beginning to the end, when I can read the second part, if you read something weird in the review is because I help with the translator, hahaha, bye.

I like

I absolutely love it.

Excellent read, thank you.

Amazing! One of the best korrasami fics I've read. Well done!

Great and realistic story! God job on portaying Korra and Asami.

Awesome story, truly! Even though it's (mostly) a retelling, it's so well fleshed-out and the insight you give into Korra's and Asami's life is amazing. You portrayed them really well, I thought their characterization was spot-on! I really like your writing style, too.

Thanks for writing this, I'll be sure to check out the follow-up, too!

I loved this! The only thing that was missing here was the Jinora confrontation part XD(I'd really like to know what Jinora has to say to Korra XDDD and Asami!) Anyways, good fic! I'm so glad I found this! Keep up the good work!

No, no, my dear 'tis you who deserves to be congratulated. This was a beautiful chapter, truly. You made it perfect. You empasized the pureness of Korra and Asami's relationship-elegantly written the way they fell in love with each other wholly. It's full of truth, raw and unlike anything. Keep up the amazing work.

Thank you for writing this story. It's been a blast following it. The series never did develop the two together enough to actually give them much cause for love, they were just really getting to know each other. These little moments fill in the gaps of the series and really fit into the universe well. Nice one.

Hello there! Love how you portrayed their struggle with their emotions, not only about each other but with everything around them, the part that we wanted to see on the show. Even when you changed some details I felt it was still the show line, I really enjoy it, looking forward for more ;)

Beautiful chapter

OMG! I cant belive is over :c I really love this fic thats why I cant wait till your next story. You are a great writer the way you always potrayed korra and asami in the right way is amazing.

Your story was beautifully written and a pleasure to read! I will be patiently waiting for your next story. It sounds like it will be a good challenge for you as well as a great read for us. Good luck with the next story and thanks for this one!

Nicely done.