cute

cool

I love the story shows how Law slowly but surly accepting the crazy straw hat crew and their captain

Loved it. Characters IC, sweet story plot and brilliant ending. I especially like how Luffy is so cuddly and innocent and didn't see the kiss coming and how Law is slowly but surely getting attracted by him. Great story mate!

This story is perfection.

Loved this! the tone is perfect, and it felt in character! also, your description of Sanji as "feeling the need to be rude to men" is so spot on I had to laugh real hard!

That's just so Law..! Cute story...

I can't even put into words how much I loved this. I've read a fair share of LawLu fics but this is by far one of my favorites. I think what I loved about this the most was how well you kept with who the characters are. Cause you see it often enough that people don't keep with a characters personality or they don't properly build them up for change, but you did just that. And you made me so very happy :D

I hope you write more! Either to this story or another. I'll be keeping my eye out!

Haha... Poor Law finally he got pulled in the motion of Luffy... Law you just have to give up, Luffy will rock your world. Loved this story... beautiful...

:3 so sweet 3

Don't make it a one-shot. Pleaaaase keep going! :D 3

SO FREAKING CUTE! :D Law is so adorable here, and Luffy is just always adorable! Lovely work! It's hard to find good Luffy x Law fics to read!

Waa..so cute!
And Law really need to smile and laugh more often!

I liked the story is was cute!