Reviews for Dipper's best summer |
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Guest chapter 6 . 7/2/2016 Please keep doing this story |
TimeCatastrify chapter 6 . 2/18/2016 Yes but you need to sprinkle in more romance. |
Guest chapter 6 . 11/10/2015 YES ! |
AlextheBeast12 chapter 6 . 8/10/2015 Please continue the story. I am really enjoying it and would like to see it through. |
dee nutz chapter 6 . 7/8/2015 Suckered put |
FuzBun chapter 6 . 3/22/2015 Please keep writing. |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/17/2015 definitely keep writing there are not many good dipper and pacifica storys out there just keep writing for the sake of |
kit Kat chapter 6 . 2/17/2015 Yeeeeeeeeeeeeesssssssss |
Gold Testament chapter 6 . 2/18/2015 I just had a look at your profile and I'm not surprised. If this is only your first fic this kind of thing is natural. It takes about 3 or 4 fics at times to get recognized. Once that happens people do tend to go through your original works. Don't let the lack of acknowledgement get you down, just keep working on it and make some more. |
BlueWolfDr12 chapter 1 . 2/16/2015 YES YES KEEP GOING |
Bumbleprime6 chapter 6 . 2/16/2015 Should you keep doing the story? Yes! Yes! Yes! |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/2/2015 You ate not being selfish your just trying to give the audience what they wanted but just can't seem to find the time . I completely understand and would love if you continue when the work load is less of a burden ok? Love the story just love and if you read the review I gave you for chapter 5 your story will improve greatly :D;D 3 :D :D :D :D |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/2/2015 Well I will tell you you your plot is pretty good but I just feel like Dipper and Pacifica arnt in character I mean Mabel is the more forgiving one , we see in golf war that Dipper still had a grudge against Pacifica Still ! I'm not saying the Dipper and Pacifica thing wouldn't work it's just that seeing Dipper difficulty to let things go he wouldn't just say "I think I'm falling for the meanest girl in Gravity Falls without have their relationship a little more defined. For instance Dipper should reconsider helping her I mean he did for Robby in love god . And Pacifica is being a little too nonchalant about talking to and confiding in Dipper the brother of one of her most disliked females she knows . Pacifica wouldn't just warm up to him either you know ? But all in all great story I would love to see you reply to this and keep up the super grew work . |
GenaralAwesome chapter 6 . 1/19/2015 i think you have a decent premise as far as storylines go, but the characters seem abit OC (mainly Pacifica- I get that its supposed to be her turning a new leaf but it just happens soo fast, still good though :) ) honestly though its up to you, do what makes you feel Happiest...though speaking as someone who Ships DipperxPacifica I welcome anyone who ships them to throw there hat in the ring :) anyways have an AWESOME DAY! REMEBER THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLIGRAM! REALITY IS AN ILLIUSION! BUY GOLD! BYE! :D |
TT chapter 6 . 1/16/2015 I like it keep going |