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Story: *goes on a long ass passage about how white she can be*

Me: damn is she transparent DAFUQ

Story: I'm super duper white fam like white asf but my maid is on some transparent shit she makes me look like an African

Me: Hold this L, dusty ass

its so awesome so far, please continue the story!

yeah, I don't see why Estelle having more power and 'different mannerisms' would make her American.

If it is raining, how can there be blood at the crime scene? The water would have washed it away. I think you forgot that small piece of continuity information... Otherwise, I like your story, though I'm not too keen on her dark past.

I don't know of that Sweeny Todd reference was intentional, but I am so happy that this takes place on Fleet Street.

What on earth

Awesome awesome story ever xxx

I liked it. Your really good at writing, and I liked how the story was told from Ciel's point of view. It makes everything more interesting... :)

I love it so far, the story has so much promise! I hope you update regularly, else i'll be pretty upset! Also your style of writing is great, it's not often you get a story from Ciel's perspective; it's hard to get into his character, but I think you've captured him perfectly. So do carry on the good work :)