This is really good!

best fanfiction with river

You do realize that Mickey didn't go back to Pete's World after helping to stop Davros' reality bomb, right? He went back to the main universe and eventually married Martha, as we saw in Ten's farewell tour in "End of Time".

I cant beileve rose accepted river.

I STILL CANT BEILEVE HE MOVED ON WITH i know he didnt love her the same way he loved his Rose.

YAY! RIVER!
She WOULD break the laws of the universe-again-to get back to him.
And she would slap him when she did. Love it.

Ha! Love Interface-River identifying the fez.

I don't give a fuck what you say, it's terrible so fuck off.

Great story! I enjoyed reading it.

I love searching River Song interface stories, so when I found this one as a rewrite of her being the moment interface was brilliant. It made perfect sense, as this is not the first time she has broke through conditioned programming and she is part of a data core system of technology. But my favourite bit might have to be the War doctor becoming Nine and meeting Rose it bittersweet and beautiful finish.

is this supposed to be 12 at the end?

Muy bueno.

Muy bueno.

This was amazing! 3

If I've started a story and find I don't like it, I stop reading. It doesn't take that much to made a decision whether or not to spend my time on something. However, if I don't like it, I certainly would never insult not only the author, but the people reading and enjoying it. You've actually revealed an awful lot about yourself. I can see why you prefer to remain "Anonymous".