If Maya is 16 in 2004, doesnt that make Barry 14?

Please more

Update please

Why can't she just tell Barry she a metahuman? I mean they are both metahumans what holding her back? It confusing me and it so easy to get out of the way!

As a stylist I’m confused. She went from golden blonde to bleach blond. As in lighter and got rid of the golden tone.
Yet the other description said “colorless”. Bleach BLONDE is not a colorless.
Her monologue was somewhat boring.
I also jumped to chapter 44 to see where you’re at and the writing style.
So far, I’ll stop at chapter two.
Good luck. Hope you compete your work.

oh please update! I need more chaps now

Keep up the good work can’t wait for the next update

Hi there! New reader here :) Just wanted to say, I really like this story. I love how much time and effort you put into developing a back story for Maya. I also like how you've developed her relationship with all the characters. Of course, I think Maya and Barry are absolutely adorable together and just want them to get together already! The one thing that I'm not particularly comfortable with about this story is that as far as the "romance" part of the story goes, it's not very original. As in, all you've done is replace Iris with Maya which just doesn't sit right with me. I donno, maybe it's just me, but I would've preferred it if Barry was still in love with Iris and Maya somehow wormed her way into his heart. I mean, the story is great now too. And I understand how it'd be difficult to squeeze Maya into the story without sidelining Iris since on the show Barry is so madly in love with Iris, but it's just something that bothered me. Oh well. Anyway, overall, I'm still a huge fan of this story. Really excited for a new chapter so update soon :)

I saw a mistake in this chapter of Barry stopping Clyde Mardon. Cisco said that "he would have to clock 200 mph" it was actually 700 mph. Hope it helps.

Just wanted to let you know of a name mistake you made. Clyde and Mark 'Martin' are actually Mardon.

Ooooooooo Oliver is back!

please update this story soon! please!

So excited for the next chapter in this story! I'm curious to see if you will do a story based around season 2 with Maya in it, because I love that you made an original character it makes me wish she were an actual character on the shows in the Arrowverse. Please, please do something like this for the second season of The Flash. I would love to see that.

Please update this story soon so far I'm loving it! Just started it. Plus I would like for you to make a story with Maya tied to season 2 of Flash if you could, and then season 3!

This is so awesome! Can't wait for more!