Reviews for Part of the family |
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lonewolf420 chapter 12 . 12/18/2019 Ok I was wrong I now understand what the other chapter was about and I'm out. Not the slightest bit interested in something like this. Have good day. |
lonewolf420 chapter 11 . 12/18/2019 Ok so let me see if I figured it out. The 7 year later chapter should have come after the maraders spent the night at the Addams home chapter. Then What ever the last chapter was, I'm guessing a random story idea or something. And now next is the sequel which starts next chapter which I can only assume will be Harry either growing up Addams or ready to start hogwarts |
lonewolf420 chapter 10 . 12/18/2019 Ok this story is confusing as hell. First you have a chapter where 7 years have last and the potters are dead then there alive and back at school then there still alive and going to the Addams family home. And now this, what ever this is. I'm the middle of the story. Please clean all this up. Looks bad and hard to read. |
lonewolf420 chapter 8 . 12/18/2019 This chapter should be before the last one. |
Tychii chapter 5 . 7/8/2019 I'm already shipping Sirius with Pugsley |
Syafiq chapter 19 . 4/13/2019 Will there be an update for this story especially with the upcoming addams family movie this year |
acetwolf94 chapter 18 . 10/25/2018 I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! I think Remus should be on Sirius's side and now idea about Hermione. |
ravendor92 chapter 16 . 6/13/2018 Fantastic! |
Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 7 . 3/4/2018 Why do I feel you are ripping some ideas of another story... or the other story I was just reading ripped off some very specific ideas from you... |
GhettoZorcress chapter 19 . 9/4/2017 more plz |
fire.ash.rebirth chapter 1 . 7/17/2017 LOVE THIS |
Iptfog chapter 19 . 7/5/2017 Okay first Remus: the world traveling uncle, who visits for a birthday or christmas every 3 or 4 years, sends constant post cards, and the potters have no idea he is also visiting the Adamms' just as often. Second: if you are having trouble keeping to the books, don't. Considering Dumbledore has a much larger presence in Danny's life, and believes Danny to be completely under his sway (and having to deal with the headaches Harvest is sure to cause), Dumbles may not feel the need to test him with the stone fiasco, the chamber debacle, or the TWT. Use the world in the books, not the story. Focus on Harvest, and the fact that he will be driving everyone bat-shit insane, and most people will be too terrified to do anything about it, Lockhart won't last two days. Have the board of governors kick up a fuss over something Harvest does first day, and Dumbles be too busy fighting his unwarranted expulsion for fear of the Adamm's family to be able to meddle too much, and by the time he notices his savior has changed the script it's the middle of second year. Use Dumbles arrogance and way-too-many-jobs to remove the need to stick to the books. I hope this helped at least a little. Also, I know you asked for a PM, but I have no idea how to on this site, so I'm sorry if this is inconvient. |
LadyLament chapter 5 . 5/13/2017 This story is AWESOME. Addams family rules. |
James Birdsong chapter 19 . 2/12/2017 Awesome story |
v1x3n1993 chapter 19 . 8/19/2016 You could just use the book as a guide rather than something you have to follow this is why its called fanfiction. |