| Reviews for Operation Storm in the Desert - third in the Hearbreaker series |
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   weezer42 chapter 11 . 3/22/2015 awww that was terrific. loving this series, and AU sam/jack...keep up the great work. |
| formerly known as Anonyma chapter 11 . 3/12/2015 Chapter 5: Those two need that kind of "firecracker"s... They need them a lot. Chapter 6: Well, I was not expecting this suggestion. Chapter 10: Thanks for not ending it there.. Chapter 11: Still in a very hevy mood but a much preferable ending. Well, anything is better than being left hanging in the air, wondering how long these two are going to take the next time. Anyway, thank yor for writing! |
| formerly known as Anonyma chapter 3 . 3/12/2015 Chapter 1: Interesting beginning. Gets me excited. Chapter 2: Took me all the way to make the conection. "Jonas"... Of course, that one! Glad, you (seem to) have stoped that here. Chapter 3: Nasty misunderstandings... But not-talking-too-much-about-it is some kind of their thing. |
| FanFicForever chapter 11 . 2/26/2015 Absolutely love how you've run this series. Looking forward to the sequel. I'm hoping that it'll take them to the SG1 part of things. |
| Nerdmom1701 chapter 11 . 2/22/2015 Great story! I seriously want to punch Jonas right now, but I'm sure everyone else does too. I'm Really looking forward to the sequel! ... Or sequels? |
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/15/2015 Hope you post the sequel soon! |
| LadyMo chapter 11 . 2/10/2015 Yeeeeeaaaahhhhh! Jonas has no chance. I love it. Now I want onas to get what he deserve. I can imagine what Frank and Charlie will do or want to do when they find out what he did to Jack. Also what Sam would want to do. I have a feeling Jonas leaving the country would not help. Thanks for a great story. :-) |
| LadyMo chapter 10 . 2/10/2015 Wow Jonas shot Jack just so that he can be best sniper and get to be with Sam? Not sure what you have planned for the next story but I hope at least he does not get to be with Sam even though I know in the series she was engaged to him. Great chapter. :-) |
| guestonline chapter 11 . 2/6/2015 Wonderful story, enjoyed your style and the happy ending |
| Titan76 chapter 11 . 2/6/2015 Love it. Can't wait for the next story! |
| dpdp chapter 11 . 2/5/2015 Perfect ending. Can't wait for the final Saga to this great adventure. Thanks. |
| dpdp chapter 10 . 2/5/2015 Understand this chapter. Glad you are adding another. Such a sad one for an ending. |
| TamaraJagellovsk chapter 11 . 2/5/2015 i'm so glad it wasn't 4 month in your universe...and also that his friendship with cromwell survived this. great piece! |
| TamaraJagellovsk chapter 10 . 2/5/2015 omg i did see it coming just hoped it wouldn't. and what a freaking great idea is that? to have hanson be the one who shot jack? that's brilliant! |
| pain in the mikta chapter 10 . 2/5/2015 OH ! Missed that chapter ! Jee, you sure put a twist on this event ! 8-) |
