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I like the cliffhanger. I await pt 2 x3

Much plot twist very bolin wow. 9/10. The details were nice everything went well but it lacked something... Like... Meelo swag?! All jokes aside it was great it was a serious chapter like every book has to show an important change. Keep 'em coming :v

Interesting

Glad you had Boilin beeing controlled and not really evil. In a way I can see this happening with bloodbending. Great set up

great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more updates soon and Really awesome story, can't wait to read more:)

Loved this chapter. How injured are Asami and Korra though? Bolin! He has to have been brainwashed or is controlled right? RIGHT? Great story can't wait for the next chapter

Heya, this story is fantastic and I love that cliff hanger . Also loving the korrasami story line. Could you please clarify what venom bending is ? It sounds awesome but I have no idea what it is ? Does she carry around mercury and bends it into people ? If so I think that's a bit ruthless considering the pain she went through when she was poisoned. I don't think korra would like to inflict that pain on anyone .

great story so far! love the fluff. my only nitpick is that there's no way the avatar world has flat screen television already. Even television itself in the public home is a bit of a stretch. TVs weren't popularized in the homes till like the 50s. Korra is 1920s 30s. But other than that tiny detail, it's perfect. cant wait to read more!

Great job setting the plot. I can't wait for the next chapter

Im liking this already. AVATAR FIGHT! YES! Cant wait for more! X}

I really enjoyed this romance story, I literally visualized the scenes!

I'm way too lazy to read all this but god damn this girl who wrote this is cute and smart as fk like dammmmn i got turnned on after the few 2 paragraphs like dayum gurl. She makes the glistenning moonlight of korra's eyes make something else glisten. Tl;dr for this story: the person who wrote this is the best writer ever and should win every trophy/medal/award ever for writing cuz too cute for me.
#thankyoubasedsexywriter
#masterofseexmargaret
#11/10wouldreadagaineventhoididntreallyreadbutyoudon'tknowthat

Great start! Keep going, please :)

Great introduction! I loved reading your descriptions ...they are so detailed i can actually see myself walking in their appartment. Loving all the korrasami. Also intriguing plot. Can't wait to read more !