This is really intriguing and I really enjoyed it. Thank you for writting this!

the story is choppy

The tears are here!

Well dang. That was intense... You're doing a good job writing this! I can't wait to see what happens next! *_*)

Please update ohmygosh this story is amazing!

What is it that Vlad wanted to talk about to King Phantom? Who are the fake Sam and Tucker from the third chapter? Where is Jazz in all of this? What the hell is it that Batman's looking for from the GIW that suggests foul play? When will you update?! Oh gosh, I'm bombarding you with questions. Sorry about that. I'm must be really wanting to know some answers to this fic. Well, anyway bye!

Props for the wibbly wobbly timey wimey divider! 3

Please update! .

You do realize it's been, like, seven months since you've updated this story? Right? RIGHT?! YOU TOLD ME YOU HAD TO REWRITE AND WHILE I'M OK WITH THAT (at least you're doing something with it then) I HAVE SEEN NOTHING. ZILCH. NADA. NOT. A. SINGLE. WORD. HURRY UP, MY TINY LITTLE ASIASN-SPANISH-HYBRID-THING, BEFORE I'M ALLOWED TO COME OVER TO YOUR HOUSE AND BEAT THE CRAP OUT OF YOU.

I still love you~!

-Turn Loose the Mermaids (DIDN'T SEE THAT ONE COMING, HUH?)(You're still not home. What the fuck is this sorcery?)

This story makes me smile every-time I think of it and you forgot it... YOU FORGOT IT. *facepalm* I still can't believe you FORGOT it. I almost cried that day. Whether from laughter or pain at your memory, "the world may never know." *jams out to this song I'm playing*

...I should probably reread it. For some reason, I can't remember this one as much as the others. Though, not having updated it since JUNE is probably part of the problem. XD

"Friends come and go, like the waves of the ocean, but the true ones stay, like an octopus on your face." I am your octopus and you are mine... I SHALL NAME YOU 'SQUISH.'

Remember that review from Fati Sid (if you don't, don't go find it)? It's funny because that was such a conflicting review and I didn't know how to feel about that person but now the person is a cool acquaintance. XD

STILL WAITING FOR THIS UPDATE~! I LOVE YOU! WHY DON'T YOU LOVE ME? XD

To TDA because I love badassery! *flies away again*

-KW13

So instead of letting his anger and hate take over he just became detached...looking forward to your next update

YOU FORGOT?! HOW DID YOU FORGET?! HOW DOES ANYONE FORGET A STORY THEY'RE WORKING ON?! OH MY GOSH! AND YOU FORGOT YOUR OWN PLOT TOO (I'll answer your email in a sec; doing this first as I listen to the nightcored version of Africa by Toto on YouTube)!? YOU FORGOT YOUR OWN FRIKKIN PLOT? HOW IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE?! OH MY GOSHHHHHHH! IT HAUNTS ME WHEN I DON'T FINISH SOMETHING! DON'T YOU HAVE A SOUL?

DON'T ANSWER THAT, YOU LITTLE MONSTER!

Man, this song is frikkin fantastic. It's so catchy. Now, back to the original topic of this review that made me sign out because FF's freaky policies.

I DON'T UNDERSTAND HOW ONE SIMPLY FORGETS! IS IT SELECTIVE AMNESIA OR SOMETHING?! ARE YOU TAMARANIAN LIKE STARFIRE? XD

I WILL KEEP HARASSING YOU ON OUR THREAD IN UN MOMENTO. GOTTA LOG BACK IN FIRST. *salutes* I love harassing you. I'm glad you like it when I harass you too. XD

-KW13

P.S. HOW THE HELL DO YOU JUST FORGET? NOTHING THAT EXCITING OR ATTENTION WORTHY HAS HAPPENED! THE MOST WE DO IS MAKE FUN OF OTHERS (because that's what twin sisters do), PUSH EACH OTHER OFF CLIFFS, AND DECLARE OUR UNDYING LOVE! WHAT THE HELL, MAN?!

P.S.S. HOWWWWW? I'm gonna get an angry PM one day, saying "You need to stop harassing SweetyKinz, you bitch!" And I'll be like "But she wants me to!" And then you'll be a bastard and be all like "LIES!" And then I'll get reported and get kicked off the site for harassment and I'll facepalm as you cackle. XD

Nice Chapter

Nice chapter:)

nice chapter