An interesting and amazing story! I really like this so far. And as the pairing pit x medusa is in my opinion an interesting one. You probably barely see that anywhere else and I'd really like to see how their relationship will progress. Hope to see more soon!

I really like this so far. Medusa seriously needs more love in this archive. plus I like the idea of Pit X Medusa.

I do think Pit and Medusa paring sounds interesting, I've always like the conflicts between the two... also, good guys gone bad, definitely a good thing to see.

Welp, he's evil. Great we have a mean annoying and rude angel AND a broken evil angel. Great story by the way. Are they still gonna fight? I wish you continued it.

There's potential in this fic. Certainly you seem to have a good grasp of the Uprising style of humor (and pacing) as well as characterization.

Only negative critique I would offer is: in chapter 2 Thanathos did a gret job pretending to be Palutena, but Medusa hardly put any effort in her performance. I mean, had that been the real Palutena she would have probably shown a significant amount of anger at the notion of having to concede her anything, even if she planned to go back on her word later.
...but it is alright, Pit is not so bright as to figure her out and now he's been brainwashed via armor anyway.

Concerning the new poll, I think you should go with something original. There's waaaay plenty of fics pairing Pit with Viridi and Palutena.
Personally, I'd go with Phosphora, she's the one that gets paired with Pit the least and I always thought it odd since having an equivalent position in Viridi's ranks that Pit holds in Palutena's (or Medusa's in this story?) gives them something in common to bond over.
If that's not an option (for all I know, you may have no plans to include her in this story at all) then I'd say go with Medusa (again, for the sake of being original).

No! Pit under her command? Considering the damage Pit can do, this won't bode well.

Hhm. Interesting story you have going on here. Pit working for Medusa could cause some bad stuff for the good guys. In terms of the poll, I'm all for Pit x Palutena, (Pit x Viridi is my 2nd choice).

This was very cool and I can't wait to see what happens next! It's good to see you're back!

Honestly, Viridi could go either way. If she sides with Palutena, she'd eventually find out about the soul thing and be disgusted enough to stay against Medusa. On the other hand, if she joins Medusa, then she'd be free to drop reset bombs where she pleases as long as Medusa gets to have a bit of fun.

The Pits both have it rough. One's been broken by a "dark" god and the other is being kidnapped and forcefully recruited by a "light" god.

I love you story!

Well... I got to say... that kinda escalated quickly. Poor guy. I'm confused though. Is Medusa just going to cage Pit all day, or use him as a 'plaything', or something else more cruel?
Ah, in the hands of a snake-monster is no good. Poor Pit got his spirits crushed. The section where 'Palutena' abandons him, I felt sad too, imao. He's broken now, kind of unusual to see the upbeat angel like that, but, is a great way to see a certain character suffer, I suppose. I wonder what'll happen if they rescue him too.
I felt emotions while reading this. Most specifically, well to me, satisfies, fear, and confusion. But anyway, this is interesting to see, also in a way, suspenseful, but seeing this not updated in a long time is kinda sad.

Wow just wow update please

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Wow it's a while back I read the first chapter. Hehe I'm lovin' it!

In case you forgot, pandora was consumed by dark pit and this is before the rewind spring incident, so dark pit is harnessing pandoras soul. Also, viridi would most likely side with palutena. While she hates humans, she only hates them because they abuse nature, whereas the underworld army basically takes nature into a torture chamber, then into a hot spring (repeat process) (also a metaphor)

... I've played the game so I know where Pandora is but then again you might change it.