Update when you get the chace. Will Jellal be able to get Natsu changed back? If so will Natsu remember anything or anyone?

So adorable!

An interesting story, keep up the good work.

I hope you continue this, I love your works and I'm excited to see where you take this one. Keep you the amazing work!

Did u seriously qoute the beginning of remeo and Juliet.

I love this. Make more.

u What an awesome continuation. Hoping there will be more!

Is it just me or is there anyone else who reads a good description that end with a question and ur just like "I don't know better find out" and u start reading the book.

Look, I got no complaints about the bard. But I feel like Dante’s Inferno would have been a better choice of book.

Yes! I always hoped you’d update the story! Fantastic chapter! Can’t wait to see where you go from here!

no,,, god, no. not the beginning of romeo and juliet. anyway, hello? welcome back? thanks for the chapter?

Whoa. WhoawhoawhoaWHOA! I already LOVEd the story, and don't get me wrong, the way it was before was still amazing, but this whole new outlook is pretty frigginfantastic, I must say. And I love it, so thank you and I can't WAIT for the next chappie! For now I must go to my pack

UPDATTETETE

Damn, Zeref fucked his shit up.

It was very well written in terms of the story though somehow it feels a bit rushed. You could maybe try to integrate some more details into the next chapter? However, over all it was a great chapter and I hope you take my advice to heart. Everyone has things they could improve on, god knows I can improve my dialogues. :)

Looking forward towards the next chapter! Good luck!