Your writing is amazing. After reading all 9 chapters I am hooked. Other commentators have said details are missing or in accurate, but this is an AU novel and you are taking the characters in the path you have envisioned for them. I like your style, the complexity of the story line as well as the many moving parts of the narrative reminds me a lot of Tom Clancy's writing style.
I know you are busy but please continue with this story, it is amazing and I want to see your vision of completion.

Please continue this story through to the end! I'm hooked!

I just started reading this fan FICTION recently. I misread summaries all of the time. When I finally started reading it I lived it. Sarah's idea worked so well, Chuck became the person that he was meant to be. This chapter was so Intense! Ellie should have been told from the start. Mistakes could have been made regarding Chucks safety in the beginning.

Chuck has finally did what should have happened some time ago, become a confident, smart adult.

I know it was dark, very dark, but Sarah had to explain to Ellie, bluntly. Ellie may be of help to Sarah down the road; Chuck sort of knows, I believe. There is an old saying, “Honesty is the best policy.”

I was actually really surprised to see an update on this one after so long, but really happy as well.

My favorite part here is how you've done such a great job setting up Graham as a real mastermind villain, I love that. Not only does he feel like a worthy adversary, with a clear cut plan, but he actually feels legitimately scary. There's a definitely sense of lurking doom constantly hanging over Chuck and Sarah because of his presence in the story.

I do wish we could have gotten a bit more Chuck and Sarah in this chapter. Jamal's story dominated the vast majority of it, and while I'm sure that was necessary to move things along, it did take away some of my enjoyment.

I also feel like I do need to be a little critical of his killing of the receptionist, just because his motivation didn't make sense. You mentioned there are cameras everywhere in the bank, and it wasn't going to take people long to figure out Jamal was going by the name Charles Carmichael, so killing her because she was a witness doesn't fit. I think if you wanted to kill her off for the plot it may have worked better if maybe she'd seen something she wasn't supposed to or maybe she was used as a means to get out of the bank and had to be disposed of afterwards.

...anyway, glad to see this story get another chapter, and hopefully it won't be quite as long before the next one. Good job!

I loved your story very well written and fun to read

Found the story and happy to give it some rope. The first chapter had a recognisable feel to it and interested to see where you take it. One small observation - Sarah and Chuck are off to a horrible start in their quest to remain covert. If we give them the benefit of the doubt, and assume that they were able to ensure no monitoring of the interrogation room, then first chance they get to sell the cover cover off they go through castle holding hands. Straight to the apartment under constant surveillance having intense conversations with Ellie and three rounds of sex god action for Casey's viewing pleasure. Could not have gotten off to a worse start in the quest to keep their real relationship under wraps:)
Nice to see you are still committed to the story

I read your story and it is great, a well thought out balance of angst, pain, passion and final redemption. Great work

Well, two years is a mighty long time! This continues to be a really good, very well written story. But, for me, it's been getting a bit too dark and I hope its tone may lighten a little overall in future chapters. Another personal problem for me is that with so long between instalments, I tend to need to reread everything and that gets a bit heavy - so this is a plea for faster updates, I guess :)

Hi,

So far... I do not have any idea any what is going on in this fic...

Firstly, you are getting small details wrong... But ok no problem...

Then you are kind of making this story very hard to like...

Hacker Chuck doesn't know how to hack properly... Super Spy Sarah Walker doesn't know how to spy

I get it, you want to Humanize Beckman slowly, step by step... But this is very UnSubtle so far

Not to mention, your characterization of Chuck and Sarak comes off as Lazy and stupid... In the fields they Excel In

Wow. I've always called "Rescue Me" one of THE BEST Chuck fanfictions ever written. TO my eternal surprise, you're updating the story. Simply amazing.
The new chapter feels more like filler, with a hefty dose of adult themes. Sure hope you lighten the mood a bit **nervous chuckle***
Please don't stop writing, I absolutely adore this series and would love to see more of your work. Welcome back!

Excellent I wish you would update more often than you have so far.

Well it's good

Fine story. Be good to see it continue and finish.