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  reika88 chapter 6 . 4/6 you made your OC a BLONDE, of course she's gonna be weak. also if Paul was LIVING WITH HER WHY THE HELL WOULD HE KNOCK?! morron… you obviously didn't this OC through. you just made it the typical Blonde female being needing rescuing. also you need to do a thorough word check |
 meatpotatoes chapter 7 . 8/8/2018 chapter 7. she goes from buying a home together in one paragraph, giggling the next being proud of him in college, to the next paragraph unsure if they will last and if so it's only due to the imprint? This makes no sense at all... |
| meatpotatoes chapter 7 . 8/8/2018 Ok, so if they were all in the pack together, how had they not imprinted before, only when she came in for the holiday? |
| meatpotatoes chapter 6 . 8/8/2018 If she's also a shifter, how is she not able to overpower him? |
| Ella chapter 34 . 6/29/2015 I LOVE THIS! |
| polly2010 chapter 2 . 1/20/2015 :) |
| polly2010 chapter 1 . 1/20/2015 Nice start! |
