I have to say thumbs up. This one shot captures the stark differences between these two and slowly fits them together quite nicely. I enjoyed the slow discovery Neji makes regarding Tenten and the bright realization he makes about love that really does change his outlook and his world. Thanks for sharing!

This is very interesting one-shot. I love the way you depict their difference through Past and Future allegory and how they still meet in the middle at the Present. I love how you suggest that despite their different worlds they can learn from each other and complete each other. Thanks for the story!

This is beautifully written! I love love love the allegory you used! You never fail to awe me with your words, even after all these years :)

Tenten as the present is a ridiculously cute concept. Love your stories!

Keep writing!
M.I.

Cuuuute!

Simply beautiful

Yay. A "yay" definitely! I love this one so much!

Not as fond of the 2nd person's POV here (I find it a little distracting... but that could be said for writing in present tense too (which I do lol)) I do like how you describe Neji and Tenten as polar opposites, though not quite, and I appreciate that you've used the past and present and future to tie the story together. (How different would it be if you told it from the 3rd person's POV instead? ) also enjoyed their kiss. Yay for fluff!

Yay indeed. That was actually really nice. I liked it a lot. I'm not sure how to really explain it, but it was really beautiful in a way. I loved it. Good job.