Aww poor Cullen, you just always want to hug him.

Great chapter. I love the vengeful Sylvanni. You wrote her extremely well :D I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Wow so many chapters at once. Yay! And here I am greedy for more. :)

I really like this story so far, the relation ship between Sylvanni and Cullen is very cute :) and how the companions reacted is really nicely written! I hope to see another chapter soon :D

Any fic that has a flustered Cullen saying "Maker's Breath" is a freaking A fic in my book. KEEP THIS UP I NEED MORE!

The descriptions in this are killing me, I love it! I also love how proper Cullen is, I was totally expecting the old "correcting your stance physically and now there's sexual tension" trope, but I was so pleasantly surprised by his actual actions! Consent is sexy as heck. This chapter is sexy as heck. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!

This is a WONDERFUL beginning to a story. Sylvanni's internal struggles are beautifully captured, from the pressures of being inquisitor to the guilt of losing her clan, and the loneliness that comes with both. She is complex and incredibly well written, and I can't wait to see what's in store for her next!

Fantastic story so far tagy should have way more reviews. Keep up the good work!