Wow. This was fantastic, I would read a book written this way about the lot of them. The characters were captured perfectly, I could hear their voices and see their images in my mind as I read. I actually had trouble getting through the last part simply because it seemed to be ending so well, and I still have a hard time dealing with the fact that these types of relationships rarely ever work out that way in real life. :( Also wish that's how they would have ended Gilmore Girls though for some reason they did not... I get that it's be odd since they would be cousins basically (though not by blood). But I would have rather seen Lorelai end up with any one of the other guys she dated (*cough* Max * cough*) or even alone honestly if it meant Rory and Jess could have ended up together. Sorry Lorelai lol . Thanks for the wonderful story!

LOVE THIS ... All of the characters were captured so beautifully perfect.

Freaking love! You captured the Logan/Loreli dynamic perfectly.

Awesomesauce!

I love this so much

This was such a sweet story! Thank you for your writing

Loved it! TBH i would read a full-blown multi chapter fic on this :)

I've read this story countless times in the past and I've just came across it again and I still love it more so now than before. It's absolutely perfect!

Although I didn't quite like the beginning because of the premise, I have to admit that this is my favorite Rory and Jess fix because you captured their spirits, the things that they would do when they're together and got their lives would go. I love it very much.

This is soo cute! i love it. especially the "i'm still not naming my daughter after you." lol

Love, love, love. Thank you for feeding my long-standing obsession. :)

Thank you for writing this and giving Rory and Jess the ending (or should that be new beginning?) they deserved. After all those times Jess put himself out there, as you wrote, the ball really was in Rory's court and your story brings that and their subsequent lives, to life vividly. Wonderfully written!

Very nicely done. I appreciated all the references to literary devices!

I like this, it's really lovely!
It was clever to let Lorelai call Jess though she never liked him on the show. But I think even she has to admit there is more between Rory and him ;)
Thanks for sharing!

I liked the story! Keep it up!