It might be wishful thinking but I’d love to see the end of this at some point (even if it’s just the first movie) - it’s so genuine and natural, Emma feels like part of the story. Maybe a new review will spark something. Either way I’m glad I’ve read it.

Would love to see this fix updated! I love the integration of your OC. Her relationship with Marty and Doc is what makes this doc so great!

Hope you do get the time to finish what you started.

I just wanted to understand why most fanfiction writers here hate Jennifer so much, to want to play Marty for an OC character? I find Jennifer such a cute and loving character in the first movie. I don't know if it was the second movie with the actresses switching and Jennifer's commentary on DeLorean that made people take a dislike for her. People don't understand, that the timeline has changed, that Jennifer from the second movie dated another Marty who grew up in a good life, the son of a successful writer, and so was curious if she would have a great marriage, but that's it. It doesn't make Jennifer a self-serving girl, because in the first timeline Marty was poor and had no money and yet she fell in love with him. So of course Jennifer's first timeline personality is the same as her second movie, what changed was her relationship with Marty, in the first timeline Jennifer dated the original Marty from a humble family, already in the second , dated a good life Marty, but her personality and essence remains. But the writer insists on wanting to treat Jennifer as a story villain, just to play Marty for an OC character. Sometimes the fanfiction is good, but when I see that Marty makes a romantic pair with an OC character, I give up reading, because Marty already has a fixed pair, which is Jennifer, doesn't need another character. There are so many single characters that could do romantic shoveling with this OC character, like Marty Jr or Willian McFly (both are Marty's clone)

Wait.. there is no more!?

This is hands down one of the bets stories I've ever read on . Please write an epilogue? This story is too fluffy to remain unfinished... Hope to see more of Emma and Marty...

I love this story so much, are you still thinking about updating it?

Wonderful job so far! I can’t wait to see what will happen next! Keep up the great work!

-Coffee 77

I adore this story! Emma is such a good addition who fits in so naturally that you would swear she was in the original. Her and Marty are the cutest pair! Kudos!

So happy that you've updated! Another great chapter under your belt! And congratulations on your new little bundle of joy! _

hi! new reader here. i'm liking your version of the story so far. congratulations and i hope you can update us soon :)

Oh my god...Marty has a picture of Emma in his wallet. I might have verbally “awwwww’ed”.

This is such a great story so far and you don’t understand how happy I am that you’re continuing it. I can’t wait to see how you plan on including Emma within the future stories. This is great and I’m super jazzed. Congratulations by the way!

DONT WORRY ABOUT THE CHAPTER IT WAS REALLY GOOD AND OMG IM SO HAPPY FOR YOUUU

CONGRATULATIONS

I WISH YOU THE BEST

congratulations.
Wonderful!
Update immediately, please!

Whoa, the balance between emotion, working around getting an OC involved in an already established universe, and adding enough new material without it all being just a play-by-play of the original source material or straying too far from it is just amazing! I wish my writing was that good

Really good work! Hope you can finish this but family definitely comes first.