I love how this has the perfect mix of emotional hurt/comfort and FLUFF. I really like how this kind of explores all of Elsa's unspoken griefs and pain that she's kept pent up inside for so long without having her make a miraculous recovery as soon as Anna hugs her or something similar. As always, thank you for this little gem to add to the beautiful collection that is sisterly-platonic Elsa/Anna.

Ah, that Elsa expression. It's such a sight to behold. It's so sad that Elsa thinks of herself as a monster undeserving of love. Thank goodness Anna is there to show her the truth and give her the love she needs.

Didnt someone already write a fic based off this?

This is the first Frozen fan fiction I have ever read. Your story is beautiful and fitting for their canon personalities, I feel. Great job and great writing.

this is great! you should really keep going with it!

So cute- I adore it

When I watched Frozen, I also love Elsa's gentle expression when she's looking at Anna.. You use that expression alone and come up with a wonderful story.. I love how in the end of this story, Elsa uses that expression more and more, which prove how much love Elsa has for Anna..

this is amazingly heartwarming. excuse me while i become overwhelmed with feels

AAAAaahhh! I love this so much! Wow!

This was so sweet! Anna is such a good little sister, caring for Elsa when she needs her most and keeping her up on her feet. When Elsa said, "Please don't hurt me", oh.. my heart. :( She is just so deathly terrified of leaving herself vulnerable, that she's even worried that Anna, of all people, could hurt her.

So many wonderful emotions. I really, really enjoyed it. :)

This was such a touching little oneshot. I really, really enjoyed it. :) Anna is such a good sister, so genuinely kind and forgiving. I love seeing her stepping up and helping Elsa take care of herself because I think moments like these would have really happened. Yes, Elsa was happy after the thaw, but that doesn't mean her entire life was fixed. She has a past, she has hurts and fears and guilt and a whole mess of things she has to work though. There will be bad days. I'm just so happy that on those days, she also has Anna. :)

Another beautifully written piece. It's very very touchy, with much "I love you's" and crying scenes, maybe a bit tooo much for my liking since I had just read the Sweedish Massage which I thought was exceptional. (Maybe I shouldn't read two of these in a row cause its an overwhelm of FEELS). But I do love your writing, Im going to read all your other fanfics too. I can see that you like writing Anna as the "big " sister in a way hehe. This actually is one of my favorite expressions Elsa had in the WHOLE movie. so I'm super happy about this piece :) it's very loving, and the word "love" to describe that expression was perfect- never saw it coming. Do you think you could try writing other genere's of Frozen? Like maybe a more fluffy lighthearted comedy one? Idk, your really good at this dramatic stuff, but I just wonder if you can experiment some.

I really liked the way you explored that scene, with Elsa looking at her sister like that. It shows how much she loves her without her saying it out loud. It's a detail that I've always loved about that scene. Great job writing about it. :)

Just like always your fanfiction was awesome! The way you express their feelings between words and actions is magnificent, original and overwhelming. Dear Author, you got the best of this fanfiction again. Of course it's not a surprise. It is as if you were made to write about their sisterly bond. In favorites again.

Your fanfics about their sisterly relationship are awesome !