Haha- I caught that. When Ayumi realized, she stopped calling him Kishinuma in her head, right? cuz the name switched from Kishinuma to Yoshiki. Hahaha, I'm really curious to know what's going on, especially about what's going on (or going to go on) with Yoshiki, judging by the summary. Keep up the great work!

Oh my holy God,oh my lord
I cried when Yoshiki felt pain ;-;
Yoshiiiiiii,stay strong ;-;
Lua: the fuck you're doing with your life…?!
I'm reading fanfictions :U
Lua: -oh fuck me…-
Continue :3

Awesome! Ｏ（）Ｏ

I'm loving it. It's very suspenseful

Im liking this a story and i would love to read more.

THIS IS SIMPL !
No doubt about it, and that cliffhanger at the end
( ο)
Please update soon, I am loving this story

…AMAZING! Can't wait what this would lead to!

CONTINUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE— cough cough…Jesus…well,you understand -q

Oh my God…*u*
Will you continue? Uh? Uh? Uh? UH?! *U*
Continue!

No! How did he die? This is great!

:0

OH MY LORD THIS IS GREAT PLEASE KEEP GOING

This is amazing so far and I can't wait to find out what happens next

Very interesting!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! YOSHIKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!