This was great! The beginning got me all tearful and shit but I enjoyed it. Now I definitely want you to write a Natsu/Ultear story. The lemon was nice, beautiful story.

I have a soft spot for Natsu and Meredy as a ship. This was an interesting take on the ship. Keep up the good work.

I don't normally leave reviews but I was surprisingly impressed with this fanfic and felt like saying well done and hope you write many more.

wish u make some more meredy X natsu story I love it

~meredy milkovich

Dayum this story is so great.

one of the best stories in the world

Great story. Really enjoyed reading it.

I cried even tho I know Natsu didn't die on the anime you just said it for plot just the thought of Natsu dieing the death you wrote was sad

Simply amazing. But in have to ask, where is jellal?

Awesome your a really talented writer just wanted you to know dat :)

Made me blush, horny, and cry. Nice combination.

I liked it

I day this is very good. I'm not a writer but I say this was probably one of the best lemons I've read. Keep up Tha good work!

Me encanto esta pareja y me encantan tus historias.

This is the best romantic lemon story I've ever read. Amazing job.