Pretty good idea overall, however I have some criticism for you.

I really don't think you managed to portray the relationship between Snow and Bigby very well; sure, the stress of her new job could very well drive Snow away from Bigby and make her act more professional around him, but not to the point where she'd be so callous. I think more visible hurt in her face and tone when she suspended Bigby would have gone a long way.

While the execution you went for with Bigby acting so impulsively with Mary was great, I really think it needed more build up. It would have been awesome if you mentioned Mary more in Bigby's thoughts before he knew she was back, how he missed the thrill of the animal side of him that only Bloody Mary recognised, that would cause a small degree of mourning for his 'Kindred Spirit'. This build up of inner turmoil born of respect for his 'slain' foe would make his sudden kissing of Mary have a much bigger payoff.

Lastly, your punctuation's off. You're missing a few full stops and such here and there. Your paragraphs could do with better structuring too so it's not so hard for the eye to differentiate inner thoughts from spoken statements. And unless there's some as-of-yet unestablished reasoning behind it, there should be no apostrophe in the word 'Spirits' in the title of this fic.

Despite my various beefs with this story, it's built around a very neat idea. And I hope you find this feedback helpful to create a better experience over all.

Yay an update about bloody time there's barely any of these two out there

Thought it was really good but needs for of an ending so chapter 4 please

Please come back to this

damn i really love this story please update

That was amazing: ) good job

Bigby x Bloody Mary..? Well, that sounds pretty cool.

Is this for Armis? I think I saw somewhere on the TWAU community about that.

Awesome work. :D

It's funny how the most unlikely pairings can also be the ones you love XD

Good job Hazza!

I NEED MORE OF THIS PAIRING IM WEAK

Hey Hazzatheman, it's CAITT from the telltale community.
Your story is absolutely amazing!
I highly recommend it, for the bloodymaryxbigdy lovers.
If they don't know about this one, then they're really missing out on a great story!

Best regards,
Your new fan

cliffhanger?! i want an update now! this is soooo good, dude

i've never enjoyed mary x bigby, but now i'm starting to think otherwise _

Interesting story! I like the plot twist at the end there.
It would be nice to see a bit of a mean Mary instead of a cuddly one but then again Bigby could turn anyone into mush so I can't really blame her haha!
I look forward to reading more!

Holy lord of all creation, so long have I waited for this! Hazza you absolute legend, thanks a million for updating this story at last!

So I've read the 3rd chapter and... I'm literally speechless. The amount of emotions within me is straight up overwhelming, and it's hard to focus on something particular right now and thereby write a decent review - I probs should get a grip first, but nah, no possible way. :P

This is just beautiful, I cannot even... Dang. It's so amazingly wonderful that I be messing up words. It's perfect. I couldn't have even wished for a better portrayal of Wolf and Mary's most intimate and soulful moment together. So much fluff and sweetness. I love it. The way you did the scene of their reunion is extremely fascinating, them revelations though! XD

I simply adore that line of Mary's: "Can I ask you something? ... Do you love me?" and can't help but picture her saying that with pure innocence and thrill in her delicate face, it's like a remorseless predator through force of tragic fate turn into a being of tenderness and timidity, the genuine one, all in the name of love. 3

Remarkably enough, this is actually the second time Mary reveals her true self to Bigby: the first time was at the mill, when she exposes her true physical self (and so does the wolf), and now she opens up her unexplored inner self to him as well, or should I say to both herself and Wolf? That's what I call the best kind of chemistry possible between Fables. :D Excellent touch, really.

The smut scene was pretty awesome too, with all the detailed desciptions of them going at it. XD I kept pulling an idiotic smile while reading this part, so lovely and heartfelt it was.

Again, thank you for that neat piece of work there bruh. If you keep working in the same direction you took I'm fine with centuries of waiting just to see this fic continue. Cheers!

Thanks for uploading can't wait for next part

Okay my last review sounded mean xD
You are a wonderful writer and props to you for writing about a ship most people don't think about and having it be good. like, seriously. I'm kind of digging the..Migby? Bary? Whatever you wanna call it, its good! Kinda can't wait for more xD