Wow, humbled, definitely humbled!...brilliant loved it. I can see a whole book full of "What Crichton should have done differently" written by Mrs Aeryn Sun-Crichton lmao! More please!

ROFL!

This is brilliant! I was proper LOL'ing!

I can just see Aeryn's face! It's hilarious! Poor John :-)

Pretty sure of D'argo junior didn't hear that word from Daddy he'd have heard it from Mommy sooner or later though! ;-)

Excellent story :-)

Nice one. This is so cute and funny. I can't wait to read more soon.

Very cute. Hope to read future chapters.

*giggles*

Very sweet! Looking forward to reading more of these! Great job, as always! :)