Reviews for Ashikabi of Thunder and Lightning
wolfpackrwby88 chapter 3 . 7/21
Sekirei volumes 1-10 are available from rightstuf!.com
Coment9 chapter 2 . 7/20
Interesting
Coment9 chapter 1 . 7/20
I’ve never watched the anime but I could tell these two won’t his first sekirei so why the change?
anonimusparker chapter 2 . 7/18
i love it
RebelDragonWolf chapter 22 . 7/9
First despite reading this several times every few months I kept forgetting to favorite and follow but that's fixed now anyway I wanted to ask if you could think about yukari winging sekirei number 55 Saki she similar to yahan in the whole stealth and espionage type of stuff if you wanted any info on her but another reason why is mainly so his sister had a bit more helping her honestly it feels you haven't done much for that yet but may be I missed something if so oops I guess just thought I'd ask
InsaneMakaioshin chapter 22 . 6/30
How many more will join?! There are plenty of villainous sekirei that could do better & quiet a few Sekirei that never appeared in the games, manga, or shows.
blazes207 chapter 22 . 6/22
I Just happy I found this fic. Thank you for good read ️
Niela32792 chapter 22 . 6/17
Besides some minor grammar mistakes I am totally addicted to this fic. I am really looking forward to seeing the next chapter and the rest of your story.
Greatazuredragon chapter 22 . 6/17
Nice chapter, good work.
DragonNightmare90 chapter 22 . 6/16
Great Chapter!
Keep Up The Good Work!
Thanks For The Meal.
Till Next Time!
Stay Safe.
NeckDeepInBloom chapter 22 . 6/15
Reality Ensues:
Trying to force one's more traditional beliefs when it comes to intercourse on individuals who have looser regard to them will only cause backlash and resentment even if the latter respects the former.

(Eh, whoops... I forgot that this was meant for Miya, rather than Tsukiumi. Eh, whatevs! It works for both of them, anyway...)
NeckDeepInBloom chapter 22 . 6/14
Now that you've written your "Echoing Light Lemon" (for No. 11/Hikari and No. 12/Hibiki) on AO3... I don't suppose you have one planned for AKITSU (and the others, of course) somewhere 'down the road'?

No. 7/Akitsu has the following tropes that apply to her:
- Absolute Cleavage (And it seemed to get LARGER with the progression of the series...)
- Chained by Fashion (She wears a chain around her neck and uses it to hold her kimono shut. It shatters just prior to her finally being emerged.)
- Ethereal White Dress (She evokes the classic image of a Japanese ghost, clad in a white kimono and surrounded by a supernatural chill.)
- Going Commando (It's usually only because she forgets to wear panties, not necessarily by choice...)
- Impossibly-Low Neckline: (BARELY held closed by her obi and chains.)
- Sugar-and-Ice Personality (Beneath her cool exterior, she's actually kind and gentle. These glimpses primarily show when interacting with her companions.)

And after all that she's been through, whether in canon or fanon, I think she'll be WAY overdue for some... 'alone time' with her Ashikabi~. Maybe she can get the... 'full-course dinner', if you know what I mean? ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)

I still can't see how Tsukiumi tends to perform very well in popularity contests among fans of the "Sekirei" series ('Ensemble Dark Horse'). Maybe it's my personal bias against any 'tsundere' (especially when it's 'deconstructed'), but... 'Clingy Jealous Girl'? 'Hair-Trigger Temper'? 'Self-Proclaimed Love Interest'? (And, of course, 'Tsundere'?) With tropes like those associated with No. 9/Tsukiumi, I call it a miracle that Minato's still alive in canon! (Granted, I suppose she has a 'Freudian Excuse'... but still!)

Given Tsukiumi's prideful nature and her tendency to proclaim herself as 'Minato's legal wife' in canon... you think it'll be hilarious in a meta-way that, for all her prejudice against 'monkeys', she ends up as a/the 'Butt-Monkey' for this story (regardless on whether she is Winged by Minato, as per canon)? Like a sort of 'Laser-Guided Karma/Poetic Justice'?

Oh, and I stumbled upon this tidbit from this story's "TV Tropes" page, under 'Reality Ensues':
[Trying to force one's more traditional beliefs when it comes to intercourse on individuals who have looser regard to them will only cause backlash and resentment even if the latter respects the former.]
THANK YOU! (ง ͠ ͟ل͜ ͡)ง

[Throughout the rest of the house at the same time, the rest of Minato's Sekirei settled down from their rather racy dreams and back into sleep, although more than a few would be deeply embarrassed by the state of the sheets caused by the nature of their dreams.]
Given that the flock are all 'Mindlink Mates'... good luck with clean-up duty, Minato! Can't wait to see the look on their faces in the morning!
deltadragon373 chapter 22 . 6/4
I like the amount of character you put into Minaka. Sure, he's a madman who created a death game with innocent aliens cause he wanted to, but he still has standards.
Tsuki-no-Hazama Hime chapter 22 . 6/2
finally! uh I can't find the story on Ao3, is it haven't finished yet? or deleted too?
Guest chapter 22 . 5/31
Thank you for finally updating. Love this chapter. Looking forward to the next chapters
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