morganna should torture her till she turns dark.

Please no instalove! It feels like instalove and I hope she isn't going to be an op Mary sue type. But other than that great story and great job

loved it

loved it!

loved it

Morgana is scared. Let her challenge Ari to a duel if she's sure of winning.

Fantastic chapter! A few typos here and there but nothing major.

Story wise that was wicked! And Gwaune us in in the group as well. Excited!

Ah update soon :D

I feel so sorry for Mordred. It's a shame that Merlin is still cold towards him. I hope Merlin pulls his head out of whatever dark corner it's hidden in and realise that his behaviour could be creating an enemy. Merlin and Ari were good and are coming along nicely. When I read the chapters now it feels so natural for Ari to be there.

Loved it.

i loved it

O.O
Update soon!

Awesome chapter. I wonder who kidnapped her.

Wow! Fantastic chapter and a great adaptation. I thought you really have killed Mordred for a minute there.

Double magic reveal with Gwaine holy hell! Considering Ari's trickery with Merlin I wouldn't be surprised if Merlin gave her a cold shoulder for a while.

Those words...yikes, I wonder what Arthur thinks of them

It is creepy how similar our tastes in fanfiction writing are.
I've got a Merlin fanfic that's (I'll admit) mostly OC-Centric. Mordred is going to play a big part (and eventually become the love interest) of the OC.
However, my character is probably going to have a thing with Merlin first.
The funny part is that my character's name is Ara, short for Aralynn. Kinda similar, huh?

loved it