Ugh! So complicated! Poor Twilight. :(

This was an interesting take on her perspective, and an engaging read. Interesting how you pointed out that Spike had a slightly similar situation, as I hadn't ever really thought about it that way. Due to Twilight's indecision, the most probable way this could end with them together is if stallion Flash and her were thrust into a situation where they had to accomplish an important task, and he slowly started to like her. I know this story is already complete. I'm just speculating for the sake of it. Thanks for the read. :)

I really liked this. Your style is nice and there were few grammar mistakes, I noticed. I almost wish it would continue. Maybe the two Flash's meet or something.

I was thinking about this. Flash is in both worlds, all of the hu-mane six are in both worlds, but what about Sunset Shimmer? Makes you wonder...

Coolpegasister says: Cool, please continue. PEACE OUT SUCKAS!

That's sad..

Wow, that was sad! Actually, something like this happend to ME. I am still trying to deal with it. So, thank you. This story helped me after my heartbreak, thanks, my wonderful author. Thank you. You helped me with this story. No, really. So, thank you.

A heartbreaking look at MLP's most disliked couple...I think this really added some depth to it, though! It's awfully sweet and tragic. Poor Twily.
Keep writing and God bless,
Shippings

That's gotta suck. It's like having a crush on a professional athlete or a movie actress, you dream of being with them, but deep down you know it won't happen.