Awww. Adorable ending with a baby zoe. I wish you'd gone more in depth with it all but it was still a happy ending either way

Percy gave up: Public knowledge that Artemis was his wife, sex, and his freedom... to make Artemis happy. And SHE LET HIM! Percy loved Artemis and she DOESN'T love him back. She'd rather choose the hunt then what Percy wants and only when suddenly she can get Zoe back then she will give up her Maidenhood NOT FOR PERCY, but to get Zoe back. For IDK how many years Percy and Artemis are married, noone knows about it and he can't even consummate with him wife. Then when his daughter dies, does she comfort him? No. She just sulks. Then when Percy finds out he can get her back by having a child. He seeks Artemis's permission to sleep with another women... She is too prideful to stick to what Percy gave up EVERYTHING for and says She will do it?! I love Pertemis, but Artemis nothing more than a fucking BITCH in this story. She USES him to get Poseidon back on the council, and he KNOWS that he is getting used but accepts it to be with Artemis and she does NOTHING to make him happy when he gives up EVERYTHING to make her happy. What a fucking bitch.

From Spain to England ?
I guess you forgot quite a few centuries because the european country who took Spain place as the dominant power in Europe wasn't England, it was France.

“Shit” was only considered profanity after the Norman (French) invasion of England in 1066 by William the Bastard where the Normans considered some Anglo-Saxon words so uncivilized, you shouldn’t use them.

This is most likely during the Golden Age of Spain during the Colonial Era with ~1550 being its height.

My only regret in this story is that we didn’t see enough Percy-Artemis fluff moments.

I never realized I wanted a father-daughter relationship between Perseus and Zoe. It’s kinda hilarious and awesome to read.

This was a fantastic read well done

The ending didn't sit well with me. The general plot was all well and good but the way you worded things makes me wonder if you've ever been in love. Where's the passion? Where was the moment that Artemis comes to truly realize how much Perseus loves her, has loved her, has given up for her?

I'd have liked Artemis to talk about the emotions that she saw Perseus going through. When she asks why he took so long, all you have us was an explanation. There was no fire to it. I'd have give with an allusion to the sea. Something about him normally being calm and peaceful, playful even, but the look on his face then reminding her of all the terrifying wrath and power the sea could bring.

So Zues's daughter, who was Poseidon's nice already, is now becoming his daughter. Well...if he and Zues weren't already brothers then they would be now. Can't be double brothers lol.

Nathan Draje

sweet story.

Er, quick history note here: Britain was hardly crippled by WW1. At first I thought you were talking about WW2 crippling them, which is far more accurate. Mostly because you said the Allies and the Axis, but WW1 was fought between the Allied Powers and the Central Powers. Not the Axis.

But yeah, WW1 was far from a good war for them but it was hardly crippling either. At least, compared to how crippling it was for anyone else involved.

Sorry, I'm a bit of a history nerd.

This is pretty good so far, there's a noticeable improvement as it goes on. Could do with a beta, though, there's a fair amount of misspellings and typos.

Very good your story, I do not know if you finished it or not but if you finished it I'm missing something but it's still very good.