I really like the story and the plot, it kinda makes me sad the their aren't anymore chapters so if you read this I hope that you will find the muse to continue this amazing story.

I swear to god your already using a magic system that didn’t really fit with Harry Potter universe and now your probably going to go off and have harry make some grand discover that completely goes against that firmly established system that you’ve established.

Why is it in fanfiction whenever someone takes a injury they are always out for days. Yes it’s a dead cut from large claws that doesn’t mean that he should for any reason be unconscious for that long. Hell I do t think harry was ever unconscious for that long in the books.

You lost me here. The whole elemental affinity was already annoying, as was your overly belligerent characterisation of Ron.. but Hermione suddenly having a voice in her head? Why? And if she’s the only petrified person who hears them, why not the others? Though my questions make it seem like I’m curios; I’m not. I honestly couldn’t care less.

Wut. He HAS seen Voldemort though. Probably even more scary to an eleven-year-old, he’s seen his deformed face stuck to the back of someone else’s head... not to mention that he has also seen the sixteen-year-old Voldemort.

Mate 2 years have gone by. Where are you?

MAN abandoning this like this is jjust pure evil :( If you ever get around to finishing this it could easily be one of the best ffs. Well written and thanks for sharing!

the will was funny

I liked everything but this last chapter I liked the romance between Harry and daphne and don’t like it being halted but it’s not a bad story well written and great plot

You left it on a cliffhanger
It's been awesome reading it this far
Please keep on posting

Please update soon! You can't just leave it here!

Excellent chapter! Can't wait to see what you've cooked up next!

Cool chapter! Loved the bit with the werewolves. Quite interesting that Harry finally figured it out, although why he was handicapped still evades me... As if the boy wasn't having enough troubles already!

Poor Sirius! I think Minnie may have screwed up! Looking forward to the next installment!

Very weird, but very interesting! Can't wait to see what's next!