This story is very good, well written crossover and characters, very interesting plot. I do hope you come back and finish it one day so we can know what happens.

Hi,
I was wondering if you are going to finish this story? I am dying to know what happens.

When will we be getting new chapters? This is one of my favorite stories.

This is such a marvelously well written story. I love the way you keep interweaving all these plotlines, and how they all seem to intersect and then pull apart and then intersect again! Thanks so much for sharing!

I love this so much! You just got the characters so much, and I love how you highlighted the differences between Eliot and Jacob and showed how they interacted with their team. The Hardison/Parker was absolutely sweet and the therapy with Eve got me really hard. It was beautiful and heartbreaking, but hopeful too. You really have a talent with writing and I'm impressed with the number of characters you managed and how your plot is fascinating.
I hope you will continue this one day, but in anyways, thank you so much for sharing this! And congrats, this is really excellent.

Hi,
I keep coming back to this story hoping that you have updated lately but alas still on chapter 31. I am dying to know what happens next. Please consider finishing it. So far it is great!

Love your story - Please update soon ;)

I am sorry that this has been abandoned.

A horse with a name similar as Twilight Sparkle belongs in a libary

You have captured the essence of both teams. It feels like I am actually watching a cross-over while I am reading this story. Would love to see how you finish this story.

I love this story! Please update soon. THKS.

Please please please keep updating and finish this. You are a skilled author and I love your protrayal of these characters.

Oooh the plot thickens! When are we going to find out what happened to Jacob? The suspense is killing me! Next chapter please!

Thank you Honorat, I hope you are well. Please continue, the suspense is well done BUT WHERE IS JACOB! Love this story!

Oh man. I love this story. I love you for writing it. BUT JACOB IS MY FAV AND I HAVENT SEEN HIM FOR MOST OF THIS STORY WHEN WILL I GET TO SEE HIM AGAIN
You psych me out each time you post a chapter cause I hope I get to find out what happened to him but then I don’t:( it makes me sad.
Not that I don’t like your writing of the others...but come on man. Jacob hasn’t been in like 20 of the 30 chapters here. Help a fella out. Throw me a bone. Stop my suffering. Please.
Haven’t I been patient? (Puppy dog eyes) please? I’ve been tied in knots since the chapter he disappeared. That was a long time ago.
I’m not trying to be needy. It’s just hard waiting twenty chapters or more for my fav to show up again:( hope you understand?
But yeah. Your understanding of the character’s thoughts is spot on as always, especially Eve this chapter. Her flashback was painful, especially since it was Eliot who caused her PTSD. Really Eve was so spot on for how I think she thinks, so bravo. The emotion was intense. Sorry for my one complaint, it really was a great chapter as always.