Reviews for The Potion Master's Baby
DivineSerenity1 chapter 25 . 6/30
Not to sound redundant, but I’m responding to your AN at the beginning. I still respectfully disagree, and really think your Hermione is OOC. In cannon, Hermione married her 1st real boyfriend. This shows how serious she is, and someone like that wouldn’t go galavanting and “having fun” as you put it, especially not with a daughter in the mix. I honestly think you’re making her promiscuous, which is very OOC.
Anyway, again, other than that I am enjoying this story.
DivineSerenity1 chapter 24 . 6/30
I know that this is really late, and this review probably won’t be viewed, but it bothers me how sexually active your Hermione is. To me, she’s OOC. I mean, I get that she had a child, but she didn’t even experience it. She was in a coma the whole time. Moreover, you weren’t explicit on whether she was sexually active prior to her accident. In the books, she seems more serious, and wouldn’t just jump into some guys pants the moment she gets the chance, as it seems here. I get she’s in her mid twenties, but mentally she’s still a serious 18 or 19 year old. She seems more like the kind of girl who would see if there’s a real connection (and have several dates) prior to having sex. Anyway, other than that, I am really enjoying your story.
ToniOcean chapter 47 . 4/12
Effervescent! Such a lovely sparkly thing!
Lizzarnia5887 chapter 48 . 11/15/2019
can there be a follow up to this story
DreamTe chapter 48 . 5/13/2019
Awesome! You used my name and spelled it the same way mine is. SERENA
I never see my name used in anything and now it's used in an amazing story!
Linda chapter 48 . 8/17/2018
Love the story so very well written
Guest chapter 20 . 7/19/2018
Poor Snape, I liked Sprout.
Guest chapter 19 . 7/19/2018
Aww I think their relationship is finally developing (despite the sad memories).
Guest chapter 17 . 7/19/2018
This chapter made me laugh! I love Snape!
Guest chapter 15 . 7/18/2018
I am so in love with Sabrina. She is adorable.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/17/2018
Snape with a nice haircut and straight teeth? Love it.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/17/2018
that's a whole lot of Weasley's
Guest chapter 8 . 7/17/2018
Glad Harry is so involved in Sabrina's life.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/17/2018
I adore Snape in this. I love what he told Hermione about her role in Sabrina's life.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/17/2018
I feel for Hermione, I would be freaking out too!
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