Can you do a F.E.A.R X RWBY fanfic? also, lovely story as always, mate :D

Fuck naruto, fuck harems, and especially fuck you Ryan duff. Kindly go fucking kill yourself.

Awesome!

If anyone’s worthless here, it’s you ya fucking troll!
Quit harassing neon and his readers and maybe I’ll quit bugging ya?...who am I kidding, You’re too much of a pussy to quit.
Anyway, sorry for using your comment sections as troll bait NeonZangetsu dude...I enjoy your stories a lot and I hope you don’t mind me Keeping this so called “Guest” off your back man!
Keep being awesome man!

well based on that Lee might just die. or Tenten ... or Neji, ya know what lets just way all three of them are set and ready to go to the chopping block and it all depends on if their executioners either don't feel like killing them or stop the other from doing so. great chapter my good sir.

- I find the couple amusing. Strange, dangerous, but amusing.
- Yep, the Chunin Exams will be something.
- Lee confessing his feelings to Alma? Her reaction was unexpected.
- Oh, Gaara. If he didn't know better about Alma, he will now.

Seeing this pop up in my email was honestly a surprise, but a welcome one.

When new chapter of Everybody loves cookies?

Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next

Do us all a favor and fucking die ryan duff.

Kindly go fucking kill yourself ryan duff.

Gaara is screwed, tenten will be courting death, neji is a Deadman walking and Lee?

Love the guy to death, cracks me up honestly, but who can tell whats gonna happen to him? Alma might very well corrupt him! But it'll be a toss up, gai did a very thorough job when he corrupted his student. She might keep him around as a threat.

God I can't wait till the next chapter.

I'm of the opinion that Alma's search for friends hasn't really made any progress. Could you call hinata a friend when Alma regularly threatens her? Kinda sad seeing hinata change but at least it was believable. Alma wade has a way of making you dance to her tune whenever she wants you to. Bht back to the main point, because of a lack of a sense of morality I honestly believe Alma would explore friendships in decidedly UNIQUE ways. Her greatest wish is to find others like her and bond with them. But how is a girl like her to know where the ceiling should be in those pursuits? The answer, there is no ceiling. She'd find a "light" in everyone that shares her pain. Thus leading her to be infatuated with mtiple people. Naruto would obviously hold the largest piece of her heart for being the sole reason she was capable of escaping her personal hell. But I can honestly see Alma not sharing her light, but gaining more as long as their infatuation remains on her. Then she introduces them, bringing them into her fold with naruto as out of their reach. On a pedestal even, above the others.

That's how I see it anyway. I'm satisfied as is, just felt the urge to give my opinion.

Theres no way you don't have something in the works with kurenai. Hinata's mother in all but blood would definitely see her shift in personality as a red flag considering how fast it happened.

Good stuff.

Cant wait for the next chapter. I really dont want to wait months or years for the next update. Also, you ever plan to write the epilouge for the One Piece fanfic you finished a while back. A lot of people siaid in the reviews they would like to see an epilouge

Gary Stu dick sucking dipshits like you are better off dead. Kindly go fucking kill yourself ryan duff.