| Reviews for Takes an ocean not to break |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 5/27 Love this. It was so beautiful! I wished it had happened on the show. |
 BlerBlerBler chapter 1 . 1/18/2017 I think I must have read this at least 10 times... It's absolutely beautiful, i'm in love with this story and your writting stile... The way Francis encourages Mary to love their baby and not to think about losing him... Aw my heart! This fanfic is perfection... Thank you! Perhaps a continuation someday? |
| A-shiningstar chapter 1 . 1/26/2015 I'm a mess after reading this, but a good mess... it was so beautiful! Heartbreaking, but beautiful! Well done! |
| elle92 chapter 1 . 1/25/2015 this story is amazing ,its so beautifull ,truly incredible |
| Nicoley117-TheBlueMartini chapter 1 . 1/25/2015 Very nice oneshot! -Nicole |
| Duke of Fenwick chapter 1 . 1/22/2015 Interesting story, and thank you for including some of the real canon characters. BTW: The only illegitimate sons Henry had were with other women: Jane Stewart and Nicole de Savigny, both were named Henry. The twins were: Victoria and Joan. Joan was the stillborn. Henry's children: Francis, Elizabeth, Claude, Louis, Charles, Alexander (Henry), Margaret, Hercules (Francis), Victoria and Joan. Illegitimate: Diane, Henry, Henry |
| BlueSky chapter 1 . 1/21/2015 Oh, how I wish this could happen! I love it and I love the easy style of your writing, which makes it an absolute pleasure to read! I hope to see more! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2015 Loved this |
| pixiepup chapter 1 . 1/21/2015 Beautiful! Wouldn't it be lovely to see this on the show. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2015 It's so good to see you writing again. This was heart-wrenching but so poignant, I was entralled by every single word. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2015 Wow, this was so beautiful! Why can't the show be like this too?! :( |
