Quite the interesting take on NaMi. I have seen the idea of the ship thrown around, and this is a good addition to the fandom. Normally, I like a bit more background to smut, but I think it works here. Keep up the good work.

Well this one was interesting although something felt kind of different about it I mean the first one had Erza already crushing on Natsu and wanting to know if he was like the guy in her novels and well it had some connection to it he saved her ass at the tower and from that she fell in love with him.

This one is different I mean yea he brought her home because there friends and she wanted a stress reliever but the wasn't much plot to how they fell in love if u know what I mean of course after having sex with a babe like Mirajane falling in love with her is easy it just felt weirder to me, not that there was anything wrong with it Natsu and Mira is another cool pairing the lemon was great also I just felt that it was more stress relief than anything I mean she never said that she really cared for him or anything no secret crush or anything from Natsu's POV he always thought of her as attractive but was non existent on Mira's POV that is unless I missed something.

Overall another great one shot just confusing I hope this doesn't offend u or anything as It wasn't my intention

I love it! Sweet and lovely NaMi. They're perfect for each other. You did a great job. Hope you can make some more NaMi stories.

that was good keep the chapters coming

You are epic!

You know what they say
If you have lemons make lemonade

Interesting story! I love NaMi so I loved the story and the lemon was great, as another author who loves writing lemons.. it was awesome!

-ValinNight

I love this well-written fic so much! Mirajane's my fave and she is absolutely a sex goddess! I hardcore ship her with Laxus though I still enjoy reading this very much. I enjoyed this even when the guy is Natsu. I see you also approve of the Laxus-Mira pairing. I hope you can write a raunchy lemon for them like this one too! So damn in love with your writing I'd love to see you write a glorious raunchy lemon for the sexy badass power couple. Thank you!

Cute. Lissana and laxus though? Meh.

Amazing!

Epic!

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I see your up to usual tricks as far as your skills in erotica goes. Like I mentioned earlier I'm not all that familiar with the Fairy Tale universe but in this instance that did not stop me from enjoying the hell out of this raunchy lemon.

Natsu, from what little I can ascertain, seems to be quite the ladies man. For him to get a chance to score with an attractive demon vixen pretty much makes him the envy of all mankind. Also I see he's no slouch when it comes to stamina. From all those multiple orgasms I'm surprised that neither Natsu or Mirajane didn't meet with an untimely demise.

Going slightly off topic I'm positively stoked to hear you are planning a Naruto/Soul Calibur crossover. I too can't enough of the "tale of souls and swords eternally retold" and I simply can't wait until my girl Taki has a go with the blond savior of the shinobi world. Just so you know I whole heartily agree with your assessment Pyrrha, Natsu and Lexia. They mean well but sorry to say they're no match for the characters that they are trying to ouster.

I'll be on the lookout for all your future work with as much excitement as the upcoming Royal Rumble. Can wait to see if Brock Lesnar can overcome the odds and still be the "WWE World Heavyweight Champion." But for now I'll end this review like I always have: this is SV33 wishing you love, peace and all kinds of happiness!

Great chapter, NatsuxMira is my favorite paring in fairy tail. XD
Can't wait to see natsu with the other girls, and the sequel to fairy rescue, XD.

This was good enough for you to get a follow from me. If Operation: Fairy Rescue is as good as Love & Magic then I'm definitely going to favorite you.