...PLEASE use 3rd person P.O.V as all t his first person P.O.V after the timeline is annoying and makes me feel like i'm reading a self insert story every time I read something in first person

Cool story told in a good way. More please.

Bloody brilliant!

Lol, what? 90% of the planet's mass is computational substrate? How much mass was coverted into the power generation and distribution and heat management systems? I can't help but think Javik may have misinterpreted; all Seraph's hardware together might take up 90% of the planet, but that just can't be all computational and/or data storage substrate, can it? Can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder if the Reapers' brains really run that fast, or if they're sped up by mass effect, like organics are in this story.

One and three-quarters chapters of background nonsense that, while necessary for your notes, are actually a waste of the reader's time.

Pass.

Too comical to be taken seriously

Can someone tell me what a infomorph and biomorph is please

Cool story concept.

Loved your timeline! Also, hilarious how in such a realistic way you handled the cache and the relay being lost.

Ok, your Terraformer AI idea is brilliant and a refreshing change from how people normally envision AI as either all Skynet or simply smarter humans.

Like a lot of people who write science fiction your population growth numbers make no sense. Human population growth is drastically slowing down. It will peak at mid-century and then it is actually projected to decline. When women don't have to get pregnant and children cost money but aren't used to work in the fields, people don't want to have a lot of children. If you want the population to grow like you said then you first need to extend human life so that people don't die as soon.

The idea that only 14 million people die and the Middle East becomes a manufacturing center is a joke. A lot more would die and there is no way in hell the nations there would become manufacturing centers that could compete with East Asia, North America or Europe. About the only two nations that would have anything worthwhile without oil are Iran and Israel. The rest are a joke.

Good story. Need polish.

Hahahaha, surprise Javik! Update again soon. Have the ASB spread the word on the reapers yet and the matriarchs knowing about them?

I thought the consoles were blackboxed, how the hell did they reverse engineer it. If they could reverse engineer it, then it wasn't blackboxed, it was something else