Nice sweet little fic. One of the few Naruto X Kin fics that isn't some harem filled trash. So you get all the thumbs up there. Only real quibble was that it wasn't longer lol.

Good luck in your next project. (a longer NaruKin fic perhaps?)

Hunter C. Creed

Now that was a hot scene there. Loved the story. From a bet that he would benefit from ended up with both of them benefiting from it. Great sexy story.

This was BEYOND BRILLIANT! I Freaking Loved it! Can u make a sequel the last couple of lines kinda indicate a sequel

Not enough Naru x Kin FF so it earns a lot of points!

THATS a sexy scene.

lol

Think we can get some Quincy action from bleach next? The 4-5 girls group is just...well honestly id love to see a story where they didn't join the 'quincy army' because they didn't like the idea of following an old man like a cult...or Nazis for that matter. Running into ichigo after he lost his powers would be a good time.

Interesting.

Nice

Heh, wow. Not bad at all. Naruto and Kin having some major fun. Nice.

keep up the great work!

I liked this there never enough naruto x kin story's.
never know why since she disappears (I think she dead) she could have a really malleable character.
shame...great chapter, update soon...if this is not a one shot.