| Reviews for Within My Right |
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  Guest chapter 21 . 4/2 Lots off things are off in this chapter I don’t even know where to start. |
 Crissillis chapter 24 . 2/12 Ha ha ha I love it! XD XP |
| Guest chapter 24 . 2/5/2019 So happy that you'revrevisiting this! You writing has definitely improved, I'm excited to see more :) |
| Lisamalvina chapter 24 . 2/2/2019 Wow, so I just reread this. I wanted to see if you had improved and it turns out that you have. I like the premise of the story but I couldn’t really get through your first go at it. Now, however, I can’t wait to read more! It’s really really good! So, thank you for writing again and I hope to read more soon! |
| Water vs. Fire chapter 24 . 1/31/2019 Hello! Glad to see you’re coming back to this story! I must admit the old version has slipped from my memory, but I read the first chapter of this new version and it’s really good! I’m interested to see some revelations when you explore that voice in her head a little more! As well as exploring the physical reaction she seems to have to it. |
| Missyr256 chapter 23 . 11/22/2016 Honestly I don't really know what to think of this. First Eric is a really mean ass hole and bullies the poor girl whenever he can and suddenly he's all nice and caring. And elea is totally fucked up at the beginning and can barely talk to anyone and now she is talking to Eric like nothing ever happened before. I have to say this story irritates and confuses me kind of but it also intrigues me so I guess I'll keep going. |
| Guest chapter 23 . 10/20/2015 Awesome! Please continue |
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/20/2015 GOD DANG IT ERIC! I KNEW IT! I FREAKING KNEW IT! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/20/2015 What's going on with peter...? Something bad. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/19/2015 I've been waiting for a fanfiction like this for a long time. AWESOME! I can't wait to read chapter 3 :D |
| aishiteru naru chapter 23 . 10/1/2015 nice |
| canadice chapter 23 . 8/30/2015 Love :) I love her interactions with Eric! |
| Jessy Ann chapter 23 . 8/29/2015 Well hell. You weren't kidding saying Peter was a pig. I did like it though. Added a bit more drama to the story. Good job :D |
| Ducky Devilry chapter 3 . 8/24/2015 when she is thrown to the ground I see her in my mind standing tall and using sign language she signs..."It takes a wise man to hear my screams, to hear my silence. When I look at you I see Intelligence, great Intelligence but never wise. Listen to the wind as it helps my voice to speak, listen to the rustling leaves and willow branches creek!" and Tris or Christina translating |
| felicia89 chapter 1 . 8/10/2015 Please update |
