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Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2015 3 |
chadtayor020 chapter 1 . 1/25/2015 You made mistakes. I couldn't tell if this was Third Person or Second Person point of View, and it think you meant to say 'maintain their reputations' rather than 'detain'. It's a nice story, but the errors need to be fixed. |