Season four ended like a year ago.

O.0

STAR IS GONNA BE SO MAD!

I bet she turned it on.

Figure out how to tie and untie it for some bondage.

HEHEHEHE!

I mean, technically you will be his queen in the future Star.

MM

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O.o

I feel you Star.

For I once did such a thing of looking at that stuff when I shouldn't off.

Aas

Hey there writer, I recently had a short conversation with you over Twitter regarding this book and I want to leave a full review of my thoughts this amazing story;

SPOILERS AHEAD.

WHAT I ENJOY *
This story has incredible pacing. Most stories would have had Star and Marco go all the way by maybe chapter 5? I absolutely love how their interactions grew more intense as the story grew and if you do continue the story in another book then I'd hope you wouldn't rush into them finally crossing the line and that their lust would keep growing till it finally explodes but maybe throw us off guard by not having it explode and when they do finally do it, it's slow and intimate.

Another thing I liked was accuracy to the characters and the kind of story the show is telling everyone spoke how they spoke in the show, Marco was shy but caring, Star was impulsive but a sweetheart. And the fact that Marco gets intimate with Jackie too and Star with Oscar is very loyal to how the show handles romance, not everyone meets the love of their life and that's their first everything, people have other partners before they meet their life partner.

Also the scene between Oscar and Star HURT me. It felt so wrong and dirty in all the best ways, it made m sad because I know Star just wanted a distraction and it was so different from what it was like with Marco,he was dirtier, less intimate and things like him not kidding her after and Star being so hurt as she realizes that it didn't help hit me in the chest.

Also, in a sequel I'd hope you'd continue to develop Star's dilemma that arose in the last chapter where she is thinking about her life choices and if I had to guess I'd imagine you were going to have her go from the "Have fun while you're young" belief from the start and she'd want to actually start a serious relationship with Marco.

One last thing I'm gonna mention in this section is the way you wrote the feelings of lust and love. The last moment between Star and Marco was PERFECLY written, it was beautiful, there was so much desire and hidden love it truly touched.

THINGS I'D LIKE TO SEE IN A SEQUEL
(I'm just going to do this section in bullet points to save time)

- Have the blood moon become a part of the story, have it appear in the

you know you're the top on the m list sorted by faves? think that might push you to do a sequel?

So season 4 is over? any intention of continuin the fic?

Great read

i loved this story, you should write a sequel for it