It's good, but there isn't much about dumbles or how h/hr really got together and there relationship evolved.
I wonder though if harry get's more training and less time, how this effect on hermione and there progress, she mostly alone and although malfoy/weasley are less around her still even with her training there is danger.
Bit dumb of harry to show off against 5 others, or not asking hermione to the ball, harry should corner krum about it. (is there ring invisible cause i don't get why nobody hasn't seen it yet?) haha dumbles think about ginny how he want to do that while harry is gone most of the time.

Nice chapter

Looking forward to the duel

Nice chat with uncle nick

And max us definitely not your average dog

Should be an interesting meeting.

Notice how hermione adopted a possition of suport

Nice meeting.

Would love to see the old man's face when he enevitably turns up mob handed into an empty flat

Thanks for the confirmation on the older starting age at hogwarts. May have missed it earlier.

Nice bit of investigation by tonks.

Interesting about harry's dog possibly being magical

Hope the upcoming meeting goes well

Nice day out with hus ladues. (Girlfriend and future mother inlaw)

Wonder who his stalker is

Read first 2 chapters very interesting story.

Would love to see a flashback to the september where harry did not turn up for first year. Wonder how many times they called his nane for the sorting.

Can just see the smug face on hermione when she turns up at scchool with her boyfriend on her arm

Loving this story. Hope you are able to come up with more.

It baffles me as to why Hermione could not go with Harry. How is it any different than Krum taking her?

Please update soon.

I don’t really understand, the beginning of chapter says he’s 18 but the synopsis says he goes to Hogwarts during triwizard tourney, also tells Hermione he has never met Dumbledore while 18 so something doesn’t jive somewhere?

I like your story, but I think I will stop. It feels like this will not be completed for years or even decades with how you drag the plot for so long. I mean 19 chapters and the plot didn't really move forward at all. We only read how he is collecting women. I do hope once it is completed I find it again, but until that time good luck.

It seems turning time and all the obligations are starting to weigh on Harry if he lost his temper and incinerated the contents of his room. Harry has quite the future plotted out for him, but the Queen has failed at remembering one thing...Harry is the person that can take away her crown with his bloodline.

Harry needs to find out if those swords can be actualized, or if they are deco.

The only thing I can say to that is, you need to get out of normalcy and into the weird. When I was writing I had many stories going at the same time. If I had a bit of trouble with one I had others I could work on. I've never published as I doubt anyone would read them. At the very least I'd have to run them through something like Grammarly just for punctuation. I going to put this on my favorites because I want to know what happens next. It's gonna take years for Harry to get through all the training the Queen wants him to have. I really have to wonder if she really would try to get him into the Spetsnaz for the training they offer. I've heard of all the training camps you've so far mentioned and none of them take it easy on anyone assigned to their courses. Just from what I've heard I've wondered if maybe they're trying to outdo each other to see who can break down the most recruits and rebuild them into the most badass fighting force in the world. Please don't give up on this. It's really good.