| Reviews for Mayhem's Messenger |
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   Thrans chapter 12 . 3/28/2015 Stella work, hope to read more soon. |
| daithi4377 chapter 12 . 3/27/2015 LOL five million for two autos...wow. I just love Luna , she is sweet, innocent...but not really she is the perfect enigma. I do believe there is going to be a whole lot of snogging and sagging going on soon..great chapter...more please. |
| sfjoellen chapter 11 . 3/9/2015 interesting. i'm looking forward to dumbledore and malfoy and the wizengamot meeting. you often use words that sound alike but have wildly different meanings, like threw and through. perhaps a bit more dialogue would help the story? it's an interesting plot so that's a big plus. i'm old enough that the sexy time isn't something i like a lot of but w/e. i look forward to the next chapter. thanks for writing! |
| ptl4ever419 chapter 11 . 3/9/2015 Very curious how Luna got in and if she already knows Harry |
| daithi4377 chapter 11 . 3/9/2015 And Luna shows up...so how long before Hermoine does research to find out about the extra tattoos. I'm thinking it has to do with King Arthur Potter...but that could be wishful thinking lol...more please. |
| carick of hunter moon chapter 11 . 3/8/2015 NICE ONE well very good story hook at end of chapter well played |
| ptl4ever419 chapter 10 . 3/2/2015 Loved it. So I see you might be looking to include Emma into the Potter family as less of a mother and more as a partner. |
| Pavel.Fr chapter 10 . 3/2/2015 Great story! |
| daithi4377 chapter 10 . 3/1/2015 Awww I was hoping the Gringotts meeting was in this chapter...i have a feeling that within the next little while Harry is going to be a busy man in and out of bed lol. Love this story please more! |
| daithi4377 chapter 9 . 3/1/2015 LOL so is their going to be a new trio with Harry as the center. |
| daithi4377 chapter 8 . 3/1/2015 Hmm I get the idea that anyone going up against Harry will not survive or will have wished they hadn't when he is done. Quite a few witches are looking to snag a Potter eh? |
| daithi4377 chapter 7 . 3/1/2015 LOL its amazing just how much contacts Harry has...would put Dumbledore and Slughorn to shame, and his information is actually accurate. |
| daithi4377 chapter 6 . 3/1/2015 LOL I'm surprised they didn't try to nail him for stealing the cars lol. |
| daithi4377 chapter 5 . 3/1/2015 Hmmm Harry is very good at giving information but not telling where he got it from. |
| daithi4377 chapter 4 . 3/1/2015 LOL shucks they sound scared of Max or something lol. |
