And Happy? Were was happy?

I loved it. Natsu one lucky basterd.

Man, Natsu lucked out on this. I can see why my best friend (who is awkwardly, a guy...) suggested this... damn perv... (YES, I'm talking about you, Nathan!)

Next time could you write a lemon with ONE girl? Except this was an AMAZING lemon and I love it

will there be more?

Nice care to write an actual story for it?

Dont wanna seem like a joy kill hear but what happens when the demon slayer dies and if she gets transported to another nearby body, like lets say Makoravs or Grays, then what will Natsu do?

Great story, I love it.

Wow this was a really cool story

Ei dude make more chapters i know you meant this to be a one shot. But it has so much potential to become a mind whopping story make him a harem or some thing its good

Awesome

Certainly didn't expect it to end as a one-shot, but I loved it very much, though I saw Great potential to be a full story that's Why I thought that was what this was. Keep em coming.

This is my fav natsu x oc story I have read

Really interesting story, it was really good, would love to read more stories like this. XD

Great story I loved it, and to think it came out right out of nowhere and I always do enjoy a fanfic in which natsu has children :)