I'm not trying to be hurtful with this review. But I think you need to get in the habit of reading your works before posting a chapter. I think you get lost in your excitement of finishing a chapter that you forget that you need to edit and revise and review your chapters. Alot of authors are guilty of this. Heck I've been guilty a few times myself. But I want to let you know you're making run on sentences. and not formatting your paragraphs correctly. It gets distracting sometimes. You have a great idea with your fanfiction. It's just I think, looking into a editor ap or Microsoft word will help you see your mistakes before you post anything on the internet. With in an anime there was a saying by a character that everyone needs to hear when they write. "Being an author is like showing your butt to the world." You're letting the world see your flaws and mistakes with how you write or even formulate a sentence. It's great you aren't bothered by your own mistakes. But, there are people who want to reread your works but are stuck with the knowledge of knowing that there will be mistakes inside such a beautiful crossover.

Amazing story so far

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Great story so far

Excellent

Great chapter

Love this story

Fabulous chapter

Awesome chapter