Ugh, Daphne-Sue, how original...

I recommend you get a beta or a friend to edit your work. I enjoy your plot but the typos make it hard for me to power through. There are so many that it distracts from what is probably a good story. I’m just having such a hard time concentrating on it. I don’t know if you are relying on autocorrect or just self check, but for future works I recommend getting a second opinion before posting. Maybe if you ever feel motivated to do so, you can correct and repost this story. I would really like to read it through without all the typos distracting me. It’s a shame, but at this time I doubt I can finish it. I might return to this story at a future point. Good luck on your future endeavors.

sorry. Ata second read thru, years apart, as soon as I heard promise, and Lord Sirius Black's underage heir is put into an illegal contract... I decided the story is truly derailed, off the tracks and just a train wreck. finite

France. Fleur, not Daphne, wanted to be an accountant at Gringots

Harry has taken polyjuice before, so he was a dumb-ass for not stunning Crouch while he was turning from Moody. There was no way he could defend himself (crouch) while his skin is bubbling and bones are stretching, and all that. It was his only chance. Duh!

"archived" we're losing something in translation with that word. That's like, the third or fourth time I thought 'why is she saying "archived"? Still haven't figured it out yet.

'Lowly ministry employee?'
Even if Crouch Sr. was derailed from his hopes to be Minister, he's probably STILL number three in the whole goverment behind Fudge and Bones. Head of International Cooperation is HUGE. That's like, Secretary of State in America, or Secretary of State for International Development in Britain (muggle).

Since when does anyone need to be asleep before Pomfrey heals them? Usually it's 'spell, spell, spell, potion. potion, potion, "stay overnight, don't move or I'll stun you".

Oh, and way back when Harry took 'Skelegrow' in the jungle? you can NOT have a pain potion with skelegrow, for whatever reason. It's IN the book. (sticks tongue out, maturely)

Gillyweed came from the Mediterranean, I think? Not sure why people change sh**.
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And isn't Harry supposed to be spending his whole break at Gringott's doing appretice type stuff?

Because you didn't explain it we'll never know, but Harry SHOULD have Draco stunned on the first 'shot' of the duel. You never said he missed, or how Draco wasn't flat on his back.

Yeah, Dumbledore didnt 'win' that hat. it's part of his 'boudoir' collection, and he has ass-less chaps and a little pink pony on a stick, too.

Malfoy's 'temporary expulsion'- would be a suspension. expulsion is "your outa here. don't let the door hit your ass on the way out, and don't come back!" If you say- 'thirty day suspension' above, then why change the wording later?

a 'harmless bludgeoning spell'? Oxymoron much? I always thought the weakest bludgeoner would cave the side of your head in, and a strong one would put you in a grave you just had dug for you?!

"Growling crystal"?

You know, this far in, I'm pretty well convinced that the English/German thing is NOT a problem, and that the mistakes are actually from just typing too fast, or whatever.
One does not complain, however, when one's international language repertoire is counting to ten in Japanese, fifteen years ago, in Karate class... of which I now remember "Ich, Ni, San", or 1, 2, 3.
Yes, pathetic. So, no, I will NOT be starting any fanfiction in some language other than 'Merican (English, bastardized by three hundred years in 'the colonies'), and I will not be doing anything but praising YOUR efforts. 300K in a second language is (poof!) mind blown.

I think it's 'seventh son of a seventh son' like the movie. Ginny would actually have to be the seventh daughter of a seventh daughter, not child, to have it matter.
And besides, Ginerva is a money grubbing, gold digging, do ANYTHING to get her mythical Boy who lived, potion wielding, hot headed, future fat chick, harpy, WHORE! So no one cares!

No. Albus "borrowed" the cloak, having heard the prophecy, and knowing Riddle would attack soon. He wanted one less layer of protection available to James and Lily. That way he would be closer to controlling Harry.

This is horrible, incorigable, and inappropriate, but if Harry and Daphne would just go find a closet and what just once, the she would be "spoiled", and in breach of contract, and Harry could do his 'saving people thing' he does and save her all to himself.
And where is she REALLY going to find a better catch than the heir to Potter AND Black?! The whole Malfoy thing is fishy, and the dad must be sacricing his oldest to avoid persecution by the death eaters (I will not capitalized a terrorist group)